Chain, chain, chain, chain of haiku fools

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Oy and eek...methinks this haiku thread is still a 5-7-5 syllable format thingie, which I shall now attempt to demonstrate:

Blissed out. Undaunted.
Nothing can ruin her day--
she's the Birthday Girl!

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"Volcanic justice,"
said Abe Vigoda. "Now jump!"
I have no response.
 

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Shattering at dawn,
by noon, gather'd my pieces,
by dusk, braced for night.
 

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by dusk braced for night
silence took a turn for it might
stars appear to light by magic of height
 

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Hi cacia,

Haiku have a 5-7-5 syllable count. Trimming your last line to fit.

Stars appear to light
our path to eternity,
'til clouds bring us peace.
 

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Palm to palm in pray'r,
clap, slap, we play pattycake
for the Elder gods
 

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Time transpires still,
breathes in, moments pass, breathes out
the deep sigh of you.
 

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Should have bought name brand
when I paid to grow a clone;
purple-me is weird.
 

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Purple-me is weird
Lavender grows within
Blend of blaze and ice
 

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Blend of blaze and ice
creativity of pain
such precocious nerves.