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Going through my first draft, and I have really overused "A few days later" or words and phrases to that effect. Anyone got any better ways to show that a few days have passed, rather than flat out stating it?
The book takes place in a span of around 6 weeks--so I can't use the old summer to winter transition by describing the snow or the trees.
It's something I find tricky to do.
The book takes place in a span of around 6 weeks--so I can't use the old summer to winter transition by describing the snow or the trees.
It's something I find tricky to do.