Also, I think Chapter Two may be done outlining wise. At the moment, I need at least one 'transformation' block done for each chapter, and Matthew's one is done, and I can't think of anything for Carla's block that fits with what happens in the main plot. I'll see how I go during the 'proper' outlining period, and of course, the editing stages.
And yes, Kathryn. it is mean, but quite important to the plot, unfortunatly. His insecurities have to come from somewhere, right?
ETA: Well, I need to think of a title for this chapter, but that's not a major problem.