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I would like to thank everybody that encouraged me to continue when I was wondering if I should start all over again.

I've spent the last couple of weeks or so, not rewriting, but rethinking. I looked back on each chapter I'd written and thought about what should stay, what should go, what should be added. I outlined the story arc for each major character. I cleared up some problems with my world-building. Although I haven't plotted all the way to the end, I've managed to get almost that far, and certainly far enough to start writing again. I'd totally bogged down, feeling like I was digging holes and making problems bigger.

Well, it's been a very positive exercise. Whole chapters have shaped themselves in my head, and now that I've addressed all those problems that were nagging at me, my confidence is returning. Having looked at the story from multiple points of view, plot holes have filled in and new ideas have popped up. Today I sat down and cranked out about 2500 words, which is almost record-breaking territory for me. And I know what story I'm going to be telling tomorrow too. Now that I am clearer on the story I'm writing, it's coming easily again.

I am one happy camper.

I do hope this experience will be useful for someone.

And no, I didn't rewrite anything I've already written. I did make quite a few notes on what will need to be changed when I start revisions though.
 

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It's heartening to hear someone say that they got past the bogged down feeling. I seem to alternate between knowing exactly where my story is going next and and utter conviction that the whole thing is a hopeless, formless catastrophe and that I need to start again from scratch. Or chuck the whole damn thing.

I have to keep reminding myself that what I am working on is a draft. But I have days where I just can't put all the pieces together properly, and feel utterly incapable of writing a word. Today was one of those.

It's almost as though I can either just sit at the computer without a plan and write well, but ultimately end up with a nice piece of prose that goes nowhere, OR I can have my story plotted out and know who is doing what but can't string two words together to make a sentence that does anything more than just plod along.

Anyway, congratulations on getting back on track.
 

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It seems like its a constant back and forth doesnt it?

Days of doubting yourself, days of thinking youve REALLY got something, the in between days.

You just have to keep going and see where you end up is all.

I just finished my WIP, and sometimes I feel as if its great, other times I think "No one will ever want to read this."

Why would someone want to pay to read my book?

Have faith and stay the course.
 

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Oddly enough after writing that last post I had a completely new idea for my (as yet unstarted) opening chapter, one that really sparked me, and the chapter's now half written. I've been struggling with it for weeks, knowing that it didn't have the right stuff to launch the following three chapters, which I'd already written, and now here it is.

Strange, isn't it, that when you're trying really hard nothing flows and when your'e half-asleep and not really thinking about anything in particular the ideas come barreling in.
 

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Glad to hear of your successful break from the doldrums. I know my advice was something like: Don't quit; you learn by doing. Now I need to take it myself. The writing part is easy; it's the polishing that's killing me. Things I should know I seem to go completely stupid on when it comes to trying to edit. I have moments when I think, "Oh yes! This is perfect!" but am now having many, many doubts. The only saving grace is that I don't write with any illusions that I'll ever really get published though rejection is still hard to take.

I'm holding onto your story as inspiration for hope I'll pull out of this funk too. Thanks.
 

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I was sort of hoping it could serve as an encouragement. Stopping and thinking hard is what helped me, although I'm sure there are twenty other different ways that work.

I'll probably hit the doldrums another couple of times before I even finish the first draft *sigh*.
 

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Stopping and thinking does help, assuredly. What I did was flip open about twenty of my favourite books and analyse the way the books begin, how deftly the writer handled their opening lines. Several of them served to remind me that coming at an opening scene obliquely, as opposed to making the obvious, one-foot-in-front-of-the-other chronological entrance, can be a much more powerful way to start, particularly for a fantasy.
 
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