Periphrasis

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Periphrasis: using a concrete descriptive phrase consisting of adjectives and abstract nouns in the place of a direct reference or precise word/term, e.g. "shards of crystalline futures embedded in the sea of past lifetimes lost to light" instead of the starry night sky; also known informally as extended abstraction and its use requires a method of 'anchoring/grounding' by a direct reference or recurrent use of one or more of the abstract nouns in more direct conjunction to the concept
 

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This one seems much harder for me to wrap my little "pooh-brain" around. Would someone like to offer an example of this device?
 

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I found something here - http://grammar.about.com/od/pq/g/periphrasisterm.htm

"On the late Boston Transcript, a feature writer, with a fondness for using three words where one would do, once referred to bananas as 'elongated yellow fruit.' This periphrasis so fascinated Charles W. Morton . . . that he began collecting examples of 'Elongated Yellow Fruit' writing. Samples:

"In the New York Herald Tribune a beaver was almost incognito as 'the furry, paddle-tailed mammal.'

"The Denver Post elongated 'mustache' into 'under-nose hair crops.'

"To the Associated Press, Florida tangerines were 'that zipper-skinned fruit.'

"In the Lincoln [Neb.] Sunday Journal-Star a cow did not give milk; 'the vitamin-laden liquid' came from a 'bovine milk factory.' . . .

To talk around something.. provide subtle hints? I use this a lot in my poetry.. it provides an extra flare to them, instead of, you know, just saying "starry night sky"
 

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the sun / such a radiating, glorious medallion whole systems of worship sprang up to pay homage


Does this accomplish a periphrasis?