Self-Publishers - Step One - Write Your Story

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Hi all,

This is all part of a project to make this Self-Publishing forum a more useful place. We need lots of new threads on every aspect of this game. You can see a partial list on this thread: http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?p=6060403

Please feel free to add your thoughts below below.

Dave

STEP ONE: WRITE YOUR STORY

This goes without saying, right? Don't let yourself distracted by all the other stuff you have to learn (covers, marketing, formatting, pricing, setting up your accounts), we’ll get to that. After all, if you don’t have anything to sell, you can't make any money.

Most of the top-selling self-publishers have a wide range of titles, often across many different genres, a mixture of short fiction and novels. I'm planning to publish a series of short stories and collections. Set your own goals.

And forget all those shiny new toys you have to play with, make sure you are writing every day. Set aside the time. That time is golden.

You should aim to be producing new work on a regular basis. It's this content that people will buy (and will hopefully want more of), so don't let the process of publishing distract you from regularly sitting down and writing. Every day.

Be disciplined. If you want to be a professional writer (i.e. make money), you have to have a professional attitude. I learned this the hard way, and it took me way too long. Don't make my mistake.

Write the story you want to read.

A lot of writers hate being asked where they get their ideas from, because the answer is really in the question. They make them up.

The most common cliché doled out to writers is “write what you know”. Now, this isn’t bad advice, if you were a CIA field operative during the Cold War, you might have a good spy novel in you.

But, it’s limiting advice. I’ve never fired a musket, eaten a horse, or had sex with a sailor, but I’m pretty sure I could imagine what it is like, given a little research. And if you can imagine it, you can write about it.

Instead, write the story you want to read. If your bookshelves are filled with police procedural novels, maybe you should reconsider your idea to write fantasy. If you are serious about this, you should be reading regularly in your genre.

If you love reading thrillers, and have the perfect high concept for a new series, but think you should be writing literary fiction, think again. Write the book you want to read.

Just remember to write every single day. Make the time. Force yourself. It will get easier with time. Slightly.

Sending your story out into the world.

So your story is finished. Are you ready to publish? Not quite. It's always best to let a story stew for a few days (a few weeks in the case of a novel) before you check it over again. This distance allows all the things that are not on the page to fall from the forefront of your mind, so you can read it as a first reader does. What do you do in the meantime. Write another story. That's your job.

You need to print the story out. You would be surprised the errors you catch when you see it on the printed page. Reading the story aloud is particularly clever at catching clunky phrases and awkward dialogue. When you are done with that, leave it another few days then have a look again.

As you gain more experience you get a sense of when something is done and you can skip some of these steps, but stick to them when you are starting out, or until you found a way of working that suits you better.

Getting a second opinion.

Done yet? Nearly. You need a second pair of eyes (called a beta reader) to look over it. I guarantee you they will catch something, because a writer can never read their story like a fresh reader will, it's simply impossible.

This beta reader can be anyone you like, but what you need is someone who can give you more feedback than a simple thumbs up or down. You need them to look at grammar, sentence structure, usage and so on, as well as whether it works as a story, if there are any plot holes or unresolved threads, or if the characters engage the reader.

Fellow writers often make the best beta readers, and if you don't know any, writers' forums (such as here) are the best place to find them. They also provide password-protected areas where you can post work and get feedback. While this can be useful for checking if something works in a general sense, or provide you with general critiques, I find it more fruitful to develop a relationship with a beta reader who you can email stuff back and forward with.

Remember, don't abuse your beta reader! Only send them your most polished work. But you knew that, right?
 

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If you would like a good entry-level advice book on writing (although everyone could learn from it) - Stephen King's On Writing is fantastic.

If you want something at a higher level, John Gardner's The Art of Fiction, is highly-rated (I have only read sections, but wow!)
 

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Great advice for fiction, but non-fiction is a little different.

In non-fiction, writing what you know is critical, because it means "know what you are writing about". In other words, do your homework before you write, and while you are write, and after you finish your first draft.

Depending on your subject, that can mean years of research. Just keep track of your sources while you are doing it so that you can go back when you are writing and double-check, quote, footnote, etc.

Always. Always. Always check your facts. Especially anything involving the media. Never assume that what is reported by the news is fact. It may be opinion, or it may be biase, or it may be out-and-out lies. When I was fact checking my book, I found that there were some shenanigans pulled by media outlets from a local left-wing blogsite to CBS News.

Beta readers for non-fiction should be as expert as possible in the subject area. They'll point out your mistakes, and cite sources that prove it.

Then, find someone who isn't an expert, but is interested enough to want to read it. They'll let you know whether or not your book is too dry.

Anyone else got more suggestions for non-fiction?

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There don't seem to be a lot of people who do non-fiction on the forum, and those who do seem to be mostly memoirs. I mostly read non-fiction, and that's what I write.

I've got a self-help book that I'm going to update and republish. I used Lulu because of a recommendation by a friend of mine who used it for his backlist, and in spite of not marketing it, I sold a few copies to random strangers. I'm going to move it to CreateSpace and republish it. I'm just not sure about whether to use my real name or not. It's kind of controversial and I'm not sure what it would do to my career.

One of the many choices that self-publishers have to make, I guess :)

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You could always use a pen name. "Scott Adams" might be a good one.

Thanks, but I'd rather not use a male name or one with the same last name as mine.

I'll probably use my default online user name that I used for many years when talking about the subject the book is about on forums/mailing lists, etc. Most people in that community know me by that name and no other. It also fits the subject well.

It is the name I called myself for a lot of years.

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This thread doesn't apply solely to self publishing so I think it would be better-placed outside the self publishing section of AW.

I'm going to move it to Basic Writing Questions because it does lay out the various layers to work quite nicely: but if the mods there think it would be better off elsewhere, it might get moved again.

Hang onto your hats: we're taking off...
 

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