Stream of Consciousness Editing

NicoleMD · Feb 6, 2008

I was wondering how one might go about editing a stream of consciousness novel. A guy from my writers group brought in something I really LOVED the premise of, and I liked his style a lot, though it read very raw. I want to give him some feedback and maybe some resources, but really don't know where to start.

Nicole

IceCreamEmpress · Feb 6, 2008

I'd tell him to read it out loud first, taking notes on the passages that are hard to read. I think that will give him a sense of what doesn't work.

NicoleMD · Feb 7, 2008

Thanks, I'll suggest that to him. Good advice for anyone, I think!

Nicole

Stream of Consciousness Editing

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