Hi, everyone. I'm new here and looking for opinions for my current dilemma. I have a character who is sitting by, watching a friend get sentenced by a (sort of) court. I am using her to give the reader an overview of what is taking place. My problem is that she doesn't know the judges or their names (there are 7 of them, plus 5-6 other people in the room) and I can't really figure out how to work their names into the proceedings. I could always change the POV to another character who IS familiar with them, but I don't really want to do that as the entire chapter is in her POV...I feel it would be too jarring for the reader to switch at this point.
Some of the judges are important characters, some not as important, but the reader will have to know their names. Would it work to just say "Introductions were made..." then later have her reference them by name....? Eeek! I guess I'll have to experiment. Any suggestions?
Some of the judges are important characters, some not as important, but the reader will have to know their names. Would it work to just say "Introductions were made..." then later have her reference them by name....? Eeek! I guess I'll have to experiment. Any suggestions?