Might, Wisdom, and Beauty

randomsome1

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I'm sure it doesn't help that my field wasn't poetry, but from what I read it seems a little disjointed. At times it reads more like a stream-of-consciousness sometimes-rhyming character study than poetry. Was that what you were going for?
 

NightmareHero

No, I just wanted to write a book on poetry and short prose.