Received Agent Call

Hedgetrimmer

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Hey, guys. I just wanted to follow up on my previous post regarding my efforts at placing SWEETNESS. I finally put the manuscript in the mail after an agent requested it but then went on and e-queried a few others. One agent passed, another wrote a personal stating that the voice was very lovely but that he did not feel enough tension in the writing and thus would also have to pass. He suggested I submit something else to him in the future. A third agent read the first page and asked for an exclusive. I wrote back telling him that another agent was already reading the book. He said to send it to him anyway. This morning I checked my voicemail and found that he had called me the next day asking me to give him a call back so we can "touch base" on the book. I hope like crazy he wants to offer representation, although I have read that some agents actually call writers to explain why they must turn down a project. I'll give him a call this afternoon and see what's up. I'll let you guys know how it goes.
 

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Good luck!!!! Sounds very good! :)
 

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I hope like crazy he wants to offer representation, although I have read that some agents actually call writers to explain why they must turn down a project.

So funny! This was my thought when I got a voicemail from an agent! Fingers crossed the call is to offeer representation and remember, even if it isn't, for an agent to call is a BIG STEP and means that you have a great book. I can't wait to hear how it goes!
 

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Good luck! I hope this is it!!!
 

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Oooooooooooooooh - fingers crossed for you. Good luck. Very exciting.

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Can't wait to hear an update...

You must have a fabulous book on your hands to get a call. Big conrgats!
 

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Any news yet Hedgetrimmer? :D Wishing you luck! :)
 

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From what I've heard, phone calls can be revision requests, acceptances, and, perhaps less likely, rejections. At any rate, you deserve to celebrate for getting this far.

Good luck! :)
 

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Okay, here's what has happened in the last few hours. I received an e-mail from the first agent who requested the book. He said he didn't feel he knew the right editors for it and, therefore, was declining to take it on.

I gave the other agent a call, who was out of the office. A little while later, he called back. He said a lot of wonderful things about the book, even saying he could send it out "as is" but that he thought the book would fetch a lot more money with revisions. He loves the voice and the character, but his main concern, as is with others in his office who read the book, is that there isn't enough conflict. He said while he personally loves character-driven books, he was worried that I might lose some readers along the way.

He said he and his staff feel the book can be something really special and strongly believe in it, and they would like to work with me on an exclusive basis. Next week he's sending me a list of comments they made to see if I can incorporate the revisions. I told him I was totally up for that, although in actuality I find revising a completed work extremely difficult.

So all in all, he didn't offer to rep me just yet, as I suppose it all hinges on how I handle the revising process.
 

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Hedgetrimmer, I think that's great news. I'm guessing the comments should make revising it a little easier. Good luck.
 

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Thanks for the encouragment, guys.

One of the points the agent kept making was that the book was a bit too "quiet," although he understood that tends to be the case with character-driven novels. My concern is that they may want me to change the book to something plot driven, ultimately making it a completely different work. I'll wait and see what their comment list looks like. I've already begun thinking of various scenes to introduce more conflict without changing the tone and scope of the work.
 

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Yeah just wait to see what he says, don't get ahead of yourself just yet! I always do that, trying to figure out what it is someone is going to say instead of just waiting for them to say it, lol!

But congrats man, this is all really awesome!
 

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How exciting! Best of luck with revisions!
 

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Truly awesome, and we all get credit for recognizing your brilliance first!

I've read at least one agent interview who said she ALWAYS sends the revision letter first before offering representation. It's a way for her to see if the author is really someone she'll be able to work with. Kind of a test.

Best of luck. I hope the suggestions are things that can make the book even better, things you feel comfortable with.