Rate-a-poem: Miniver Cheevy, by Edwin Arlington Robinson

Rate-a-poem: Miniver Cheevy, by E.A. Robinson

  • 5 Stars: A masterpiece

    Votes: 1 16.7%
  • 4 Stars: A strong poem, but some elements didn't appeal to me

    Votes: 2 33.3%
  • 3 Stars: A good poem, but it didn't move me to any great extent

    Votes: 3 50.0%
  • 2 Stars: A flawed or uninspiring piece of work

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • 1 Star: Does absolutely nothing for me

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    6

poetinahat

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MINIVER CHEEVY, child of scorn,
..Grew lean while he assailed the seasons;
He wept that he was ever born,
.. And he had reasons.

Miniver loved the days of old
.. When swords were bright and steeds were prancing;
The vision of a warrior bold
.. Would set him dancing.

Miniver sighed for what was not,
.. And dreamed, and rested from his labors;
He dreamed of Thebes and Camelot,
.. And Priam’s neighbors.

Miniver mourned the ripe renown
.. That made so many a name so fragrant;
He mourned Romance, now on the town,
.. And Art, a vagrant.

Miniver loved the Medici,
.. Albeit he had never seen one;
He would have sinned incessantly
.. Could he have been one.

Miniver cursed the commonplace
.. And eyed a khaki suit with loathing;
He missed the mediaeval grace
.. Of iron clothing.

Miniver scorned the gold he sought,
.. But sore annoyed was he without it;
Miniver thought, and thought, and thought,
.. And thought about it.

Miniver Cheevy, born too late,
.. Scratched his head and kept on thinking;
Miniver coughed, and called it fate,
.. And kept on drinking.

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dahmnait

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When you figure it out, will you let me know?
Technically, the poem is well written, but it had a point against it from the beginning. I like poetry that flows, and this particular form has always felt choppy to me. I don't think that the repetition of words for the sake of rhyming helps.

I did find it interesting that when I read it aloud some of the verses flowed quite well, whereas others were stiff.

I suppose I will now have to play with this form and see if I can’t create a poem that flows.

Thanks for sharing. :)
 

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I don't venture into the poetry forums because you people scare me. But honestly, this is one of the great American poems of all time and one of my personal favorites.

I don't think "flow" was Robinson's goal; in fact, the wonderful structure and chopped last line of each stanza fits the subject perfectly.
 

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I gave it four stars. I know one of my English teachers/profs read this aloud and I wish I could remember which one. BTW, I think there is some code to Miniver Cheevy, but the best I can come up with is: Even me, ivy rich
 

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I gave it a three. It really doesn't inspire me to think about it much beyond that.