Kerouac-ian Haiku

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No, it's not metered! (I know there are a lot of other Haiku threads out there.) I don't know if I'm supposed to post this, or if this is even a good exercise, but my English teacher introduced Kerouac-ian Haiku to our class and I thought it might be good for everyone, just to get some poetic juices flowing.

So, Kerouac-ian Haiku has three lines--it's very short--and it has a message, etc. It often centers around nature or an event, and often uses a dash between lines. For example (from Mr. Kerouac himself):

"Missing a kick
at the icebox door
It closed anyway."

or, my favorite (haha):

"Those birds sitting
out there on the fence--
They're all going to die."

So, if you're interested--post your haiku!
 
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he flirted with her
I wanted her too
they walked away together


not sure if this works but I was game to try.
 

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...good job to everyone who has posted!
 

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sees modern haiku as photos
bringing no insight
(Alt - having no meaning)

Copyright (c) 7 Jun 2007 James R. Hoye
 
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When flowers open
color and fragrance
capture all senses
(Alt - a sensual treat)

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Hey Godfather, You didn't happen to be listening to Harry Nilsson's "Everybody's Talking At Me" when you wrote this, did you?

Just wondering :D

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never heard of it man, but the weather here changed alot these days. goes from sunshine to torrential outpour in the time it takes to scribble a face.

i just ordered kerouac's book of haikus yesterday.. along with mexico city blues.
 

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barbeque smoke
drives insects away
attracts men and pets
______

barbeque season
even amateur chefs
cook edible meals

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