HELP!!!!!!!! Here's my character:
He's around twentish, a white guy who acts ghetto-ish around teens, but adultish around adults, volunteers as a supervisor with community work and hits on the girls on the community work team. The kids on community work did petty things and are doing community time to avoid going to juvie hall. What's a nickname the kids could give him that would be demeaning?
Here's the scene.
A sharp pain jabbed her in the back and she was pushed to the ground. She looked over her shoulder. Ronny, the site supervisor, loomed over her. Jerk! Just because he was over twenty, he thought he ruled the world. The skinny pervert reminded her of a scarecrow perched on a pole. If he weren’t so creepy, he’d be comedy relief.
“You bored, Beasley?” he asked, his gray eyes boring into hers. “If you need something to do, we could take a walk into the woods.”
“No, that’s ok, I’ll work.“ She rose and searched for trash. No wonder the other kids called him XXX behind his back. What idiot put this scum in charge of them?
“You keep turning me down. Learn to play the game. Make me happy and I’ll make your time easy.”
Her stomach lurched. She was a nerd, no one liked her. So why was he coming after her?
“You ain‘t shy, are ya?” he asked, dragging his fingertips up and down her arms.
“Please, leave me alone,” she said, trying to move away from him. She pushed a wild strand of her curly hair behind her ear and looked for trash on the ground. But he moved in front of her.
“I need to get back to work,” she said, “How can I do my time if you’re standing here?”
His eyes narrowed. “Girl, don‘t you diss me. I’ll see your white a** in Juvie Hall.”
Shouts echoed across the park. Ronny looked over his shoulder and cursed. She followed his gaze. Kids had gathered in a circle, watching two guys fight. He turned back to her and his gaze dropped to her chest, then back to her eyes. Chills raced down her back.
“You think about what I said, b***h.” Then he turned and made his way to the fight.
Any ideas on a nickname?? Kids have told me he's a wigga, or a chi-mo. Chi-mo??? I have no idea!!!
kim
He's around twentish, a white guy who acts ghetto-ish around teens, but adultish around adults, volunteers as a supervisor with community work and hits on the girls on the community work team. The kids on community work did petty things and are doing community time to avoid going to juvie hall. What's a nickname the kids could give him that would be demeaning?
Here's the scene.
A sharp pain jabbed her in the back and she was pushed to the ground. She looked over her shoulder. Ronny, the site supervisor, loomed over her. Jerk! Just because he was over twenty, he thought he ruled the world. The skinny pervert reminded her of a scarecrow perched on a pole. If he weren’t so creepy, he’d be comedy relief.
“You bored, Beasley?” he asked, his gray eyes boring into hers. “If you need something to do, we could take a walk into the woods.”
“No, that’s ok, I’ll work.“ She rose and searched for trash. No wonder the other kids called him XXX behind his back. What idiot put this scum in charge of them?
“You keep turning me down. Learn to play the game. Make me happy and I’ll make your time easy.”
Her stomach lurched. She was a nerd, no one liked her. So why was he coming after her?
“You ain‘t shy, are ya?” he asked, dragging his fingertips up and down her arms.
“Please, leave me alone,” she said, trying to move away from him. She pushed a wild strand of her curly hair behind her ear and looked for trash on the ground. But he moved in front of her.
“I need to get back to work,” she said, “How can I do my time if you’re standing here?”
His eyes narrowed. “Girl, don‘t you diss me. I’ll see your white a** in Juvie Hall.”
Shouts echoed across the park. Ronny looked over his shoulder and cursed. She followed his gaze. Kids had gathered in a circle, watching two guys fight. He turned back to her and his gaze dropped to her chest, then back to her eyes. Chills raced down her back.
“You think about what I said, b***h.” Then he turned and made his way to the fight.
Any ideas on a nickname?? Kids have told me he's a wigga, or a chi-mo. Chi-mo??? I have no idea!!!
kim
