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Do any of your characters have noticeable afflictions like herpes or another trait of despair or grief that distinguishes them?

af·flic·tion –noun 1. a state of pain, distress, or grief; misery: They sympathized with us in our affliction.
2. a cause of mental or bodily pain, as sickness, loss, calamity, or persecution.

Do you consciously (or not) think of adding an afflicted character to your story?

How do you feel about dramatizing the pain or suffering of another for a story? Or do you?
 

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Yes, but not a physical affliction. In my story, the actions of my main character cause him to lose his job, then later his wife leaves him.

And when my main character expects unemployment checks, instead he finds out that the company blocked his getting unemployment.

How do I feel about dramatizing this? I feel it's important to the story to show how he caused these events to happen, plus how they affect him and the story. Showing his pain is something readers can identify with.

Losing a job and/or a wife is something familiar with many people. Readers will hopefully be empathetic to the character, while at the same time be saying "You should have seen this coming."

But I've never thought of adding an afflicted character to the story.

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Yes, but not a physical affliction. In my story, the actions of my main character cause him to lose his job, then later his wife leaves him.

And when my main character expects unemployment checks, instead he finds out that the company blocked his getting unemployment.

How do I feel about dramatizing this? I feel it's important to the story to show how he caused these events to happen, plus how they affect him and the story. Showing his pain is something readers can identify with.

Losing a job and/or a wife is something familiar with many people. Readers will hopefully be empathetic to the character, while at the same time be saying "You should have seen this coming."

But I've never thought of adding an afflicted character to the story.

allen
I agree. We have the anquish of our afflictions in how a character deals with adversity. Nicely put, sir.
 

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My main character is grieving over the death of his wife. It's a major part of who he is in the beginning of the book, causing rifts between him and his mother and him and his son. Seriously, if the character doesn't experience some pain and suffering (physical/mental/emotional) then something's probably wrong with the story.
 

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I made one of my short story characters blind. Another had cancer.

There's a guy down the road from us who's in a wheelchair. He's divorced and only sees his kids on weekends. I've often considered writing a story about him.

But mostly my characters have emotional afflictions, not physical.

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I currently have a MC who is an alcoholic bent on suicide waiting for a train to run him down.

But, no....no afflictions I can think of.
 

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I gave one of my characters a robotic hand that didn't work properly, and that he couldn't afford to get fixed. It played a large part in one of the subplots. I drew on quite a lot of personal experience (something I don't usually do when writing), to show how having the broken hand affected him. It also helped to introduce a lot of the things that had happened to him prior to the beginning of the book.
 

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Drug addiction.....



I'm worried, however, that it is too cliche, despite it being necessary for the story.
 

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Akuma said:
Drug addiction.....



I'm worried, however, that it is too cliche, despite it being necessary for the story.

Why should this be a cliche? Leave it there. It's an epidemic worldwide and affects lives. In my WIP one of the characters, the MC's friend, is into drugs. It is necessary for the story and for MC. When MC found out, she was in shock and had to understand her friend's behavior and emotional instability. As a matter of fact, I was thinking to start a thread about cliches used in novels (situations, characters, how to avoid or incorporate stereotypes).
 

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Adagio said:
Why should this be a cliche? Leave it there. It's an epidemic worldwide and affects lives. In my WIP one of the characters, the MC's friend, is into drugs. It is necessary for the story and for MC. When MC found out, she was in shock and had to understand her friend's behavior and emotional instability. As a matter of fact, I was thinking to start a thread about cliches used in novels (situations, characters, how to avoid or incorporate stereotypes).
I agree. Drugs kill. Drug addiction is an affliction many writers I found avoid like the plague. But American has a drug addiction problem, so why not write about a character with this problem?

Don't avoid social ills when writing because we do have an obligation to bring these people out into the open so our society knows more of their plight.

Good points!
 

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My characters' afflictions are usually dramatized problems of the general youth, such as the differences between the social classes ( jocks and nerds :p) and true acceptance. Guess this might help readers to relate to them and learn how to handle their lives better...since several of my characters are based on the people I hate and how I can see them truly develop into a better person.
 

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My main character's affliction is her paranoia. She over analyzes everything. Plus, she's pessimistic; she looks for the worst thing that could happen in a scenario. This adds humor, or so I'm told.
 

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I've been playing with a story where the MC is in a wheelchair.

I don't know if it's an affliction, per say, but one of my other characters has synthesisa (That's probably misspelled, I know.) Hers manifests mostly as seeing letters in a rainbow of colors rather than black and white - which causes some rather unusual problems when she color-codes all the files in her office by her own personal color wheel rather than any "logical" alphabetical order and her husband has to try to find something.
 

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I personally find characters that are perfect in every way both physically and mentally, AND ones who never make a bad decision or have any regrets, to be too boring and vanilla to tolerate.

No one in real life is like that - everyone has something up their butts - so I like to write characters with issues. Usually it's a little personality flaw, an insecurity or emotional baggage they don't know they're carrying - maybe they make a wrong decision along the way and have to suffer (and overcome) the consequences.

Now and again I've tossed in either drug issues or I let them smoke too much (but those of you who smoke probably don't see that as a character issue!) :)
 

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Yup. I have a major character who suffers from alopecia universalis (total hairloss), and she's a woman.

In my latest novel, I've decided my MC does not speak. THAT should be quite a challenge!
 

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Almost all of them, yes. Madness. Mutation. Physical deformity. Narcissism. Self-centeredness. Bastardiness. Variations thereof...

The aim has been to create interesting stories populated with interesting characters. Abnormal characters have thus far held more appeal than normal ones. Sometimes the afflictions are intentional ones aforethought, but mostly they're simply components of characters as they arrive onstage. Dramatizing pain and suffering, by the way, is part and parcel of the kit -- though this pain and suffering need not be centered around the aforementioned afflictions. That is to say, the pain and suffering is less the result of the existence of the afflictions and much more the result of what the characters make of them, or how they let those afflictions rule them.
 

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One of my main characters suffers a drug addiction, another is an alcoholic, one loses his hand near the end of book 1, one has permanently disfigured fingers, one is basically undead. That's all I can think at the moment.

I think burdening your characters with afflictions makes them that much more interesting. These kinds of things happen to "real-life" people, so why not to characters?
 

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My female protag suffers from a number of anxiety disorders, with social phobia being the most significant, although she lives in denial of just how dysfunctional she has become. To the casual observer she would come across as being a reclusive, needlessly hostile snob, and on the surface she would seem every bit the workplace bit*h we have all known at some point. But what I would like to slowly reveal to the reader and my male protag is that in reality what is really going on within her is reactionary defensiveness, because she has developed neither the social skills or ability to trust that most people take for granted, it is as debilitating to her well being as any physical handicap would be. I'm hoping that by keeping her a walking contradiction like this she will be a lot more interesting and sympathetic than someone completely introverted whom barely speaks at all, which in the real world would probably be more realistic given her problems.
What I want to explore with the story is just how quietly devastating and misunderstood these kind of psychological problems can be, but also how it is ultimately up to the sufferer to take responsibility for themselves in order to recover.
 
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I have characters with drinking or drug problems. I have violent characters, huge ego characters, easily manipulated characters, etc. I also have one character who was beaten severly and frequently while growing up. With no medical attention he is not easy on the eyes.

It's essential for me to point out the character's flaws and create situations or scenarios where they're too drunk or have to big of an ego to notice danger. Flawed characters are fun to write about.
 

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MightyScribbler said:
Flawed characters are fun to write about.
Flawed characters are much more fun to read about too. And are more believable. Perfect people are boring and don't actually exist in nature.
 
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