Your writing tics?

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UrsusMinor

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In Carolyn See's wonderful "Making a Literary Life," she says: "Every writer has a set of 'favorite words' that break out in his or her head like a bad case of hives." She mentions one writer who found it hard to write an extended piece without someone "relishing" something, and another whose characters often "espied" things. (In her own case, people "proceeded" to do things--eat hamburgers, wash their hands, etc..)

Nothing wrong with espying or relishing or even proceeding, of course, as long as it doesn't happen too often.

In my case, I have caught "ease" and "heft." Inoffensive enough, but you should only find characters easing into chairs or around corners or up next to someone or into a conversation once, or perhaps twice, per book. Especially if while doing so they feel the comforting heft of the gun in their hand, or heft a suitcase to test its weight...

There must be others I haven't even noticed.

Do you have tics--less-than-common words or phrases (other than Pithecanthropus) that pop up like dandelions in your writing?
 

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It's not the uncommon words that get me into trouble it's the common words that should make themselves scarce that get me into trouble.
 
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In my NaNo WIP, everyone had their hands clenched into fists. My characters also smile, nod, and shrug too much.
 

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Shadow_Ferret said:
My characters smile and shrug a lot.

Ditto that, and add running hands through hair a bit more often than they should.
 

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I believe I'm prone to "yelped", "gestured", "spun", and "turned".
 

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I know I have tics, but I can't think of them. One book that pissed me off, however, had great writing with the exception of the jarring word that appreared exactly once a chapter. The ubiquitous word, you wonder? It was, ironically, ubiquitous.
 

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Shadow_Ferret said:
My characters smile and shrug a lot.

TheIT said:
In my NaNo WIP, everyone had their hands clenched into fists. My characters also smile, nod, and shrug too much.

Ooooh, now we're off into 'stage business'. Yeah, if people smiled and laughed and chuckled as much in real life as they do in novels, the world would seem like a nuthouse.
 

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UrsusMinor said:
Ooooh, now we're off into 'stage business'. Yeah, if people smiled and laughed and chuckled as much in real life as they do in novels, the world would seem like a nuthouse.

Agreed. When I'm composing the scene I find it easier to reach for a shorthand like "he smiled" rather than stopping the flow of my writing to think of a better phrase. I figure I can trim the stage directions during revision once I have a better idea of how the scene and staging should flow.
 

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'some kind of'

-He limped across the field like some kind of zombie.
-He looked like an extra in some kind of B action movie, just waiting to be shot.
-He looked like he'd just been caught answering a rigged question on some kind of early fifties tv game show.

etc
ETC.
 

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My words include 'Definitely' and 'Proceeded', among others. They're always fun to try to find a substitute for, as for some reason, they seem to be the only suitable words in my mind for certain things.

Oh, and another word that is a problem with me, is 'seem'.
 

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Lately, I've been noticing alot of hand descriptions in my writing. I reread the last chapter I wrote last night and noticed that I had described the fingernails of each character.

*eek*
 

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My characters are a sighing and shrugging lot. I also tend to make a good deal of natural comparisons, and my characters like to hug as well.

And I don't care what Master King says; I LOVE ME SOME ADVERBS! That might actually be a good thing; one of my betas described my writing as being "very visual, almost like a graphic novel without picutres." She meant it as a good thing, and I thank the adverbs.
 

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engmajor2005 said:
And I don't care what Master King says; I LOVE ME SOME ADVERBS! That might actually be a good thing; one of my betas described my writing as being "very visual, almost like a graphic novel without picutres." She meant it as a good thing, and I thank the adverbs.

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Ahh adverbs. For some reason the word "decidedly" keeps popping up in my manuscript.

I also tend to use the phrases "not unlike" and "not a little" instead of just saying "like" or "very." I think I subconsciously do that as a gift to myself for when I have to go back to reduce word count.
 

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I just edited a paper of mine and found that I kept on using the word "though."


It was quite annoying. . . I edited all of them out. Not a one survived.


I have other words, that is just the one of the day.
 

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I used to be so paranoid about repetition that I made a macro that would alphabetically sort all the words of a chapter, essay, or article so that I could see if some descriptor was getting overused... heh... at one point I was even keeping statistics: "Most used descriptor" "words used only once" "longest word" etc. *blush*

My worst habit these days is falling into "manual mode" too much-- meaning that a great deal of my unedited writing tends to read as though it's instructions to something, instead of a story or extrapolation of opinion or ideas. That's why I deleted my main account on Rotteneggs.com, btw-- the quality that was making my eggs so highly rated was killing my creativity. I was spending more time writing articles with such titles as "how I broke into the abandoned warehouse" and "a good prank to play on telemarketers" than I was with my short stories. It was fun while it lasted, though...
 

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What a fun thread!

I dislike "had" and "that." Too many "to be" verbs drive me crazy.

Still, passives sneak in my manuscripts. Can't kill 'em all.

I write like my hair's on fire on the first draft. Next day I re-read all my brilliant prose and find an awful lot of trash.

Dang.

Talk later,

Beth
 

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engmajor2005 said:
And I don't care what Master King says; I LOVE ME SOME ADVERBS! That might actually be a good thing; one of my betas described my writing as being "very visual, almost like a graphic novel without picutres." She meant it as a good thing, and I thank the adverbs.

Adverbs are evil. Whenever I see a bad piece of writing, its full of them; adjectives too.

Thats not to say that they cant be used, or that good writing doesnt employ them, because they can and it does. Most people who abuse them though do so because they think it makes for better writing, which over-description absolutely does not.
 

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My characters nod far too much...at least until I get to the rewrite and cut 99% of the f**king nods.
I have a feeling I've overdone the looking at in my WIP but I know how to be ruthless when it comes to editing.
 

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I noticed I tend to use 'even' and 'also' and 'that'.

I'm an 'as if' monkey, too.

CHOP!
 
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