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emsuniverse

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My YA is only 40,000. Is that like way too short?

I'm almost done with the editing and I would like to start trying to find an agent.

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Sounds like about a hundred pages. Time to do some serious research. I suspect shorter books are more likely to get read in that market but would think the aim point would be about three hundred pages.
 

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It's not way too short. On the short end, yes, but not by much. To me, 45,000 is kind of a minimum, but see what agents say. I wrote an early novel at 32k and the agent DID say it was too short, but bear in mind that an editor might have suggestions for developing it anyway, so you're not that far off the mark to start with.

Kentuk, YA is much shorter than adult fiction. Unless you are writing fantasy, publishers prefer books to be under 80k. Of course, like all 'rules' in the publishing world, this is merely a guideline.
 

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Well, you made me come out and actually register, Bea.

My upper YA novel was 33k words when I received an offer from an agent (it is well over 200 pages -- courier 12 pt -- but the writing style requires a bit of white space). My agent asked me to add 3000-5000 words. I managed 4000, and he said it was great at 37k. We are now in the submission process.

But 40k isn't way too short. Just wanted to share my experience. :)
 

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I stumbled across this thread thinking someone needed help with Microsoft Word and found a newbie! Welcome to AW, Lisa! Hope you enjoy it here! (And a sheepish 'Hi!' to the rest of you, too!) I'll go now, since YA is definitely NOT my cup of tea. 'Scuse the interruption!
 

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they are, but most people still aren't willing to shell out much for a thin book. That's why most thinner books are in the YA section.

There are a few standard novels that are short- but they are rare.
 

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40K is short, but not waaaay too short. Angela Johnson's books, for example, are quite brief, but lovely and powerful. I think short can work as long as the reader isn't feeling like there should be more.
 

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I've gotten a few nibbles from agents with my 35k book--don't lose hope yet!
 

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I'm at 11k with my book at the moment, but nowhere near finished.

The book is action/adventure - is there a max word count for YA?
 

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can I ask a ? about word count...Is my word count on microsoft word actual? this site got me very confused. http://agentr.com/count.html
Any thoughts on this are appreciated, thanks kimmi
 

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Kimmi, microsoft word is close enough for your count, if you're writing a novel. Just go with the nearest 1000 words or so. Exact word-count on a novel isn't crucial.

On the other hand, if you're writing a flash fiction piece and the guidelines say 500 words max or you're disqualified, well, I'd count those individually if I knew I was close. ;)
 

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Lisa McMann said:
Kimmi, microsoft word is close enough for your count, if you're writing a novel. Just go with the nearest 1000 words or so. Exact word-count on a novel isn't crucial.

On the other hand, if you're writing a flash fiction piece and the guidelines say 500 words max or you're disqualified, well, I'd count those individually if I knew I was close. ;)
Thank you so much, I didn't understand that site...:)
 

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Ahhh...sorry -- I didn't click on your link until now.

Um... what does this sentence mean to you (from their guidelines): You will impress us more with a good query letter than with a well-written novel.

Hello? Yes, the query is important. But good writing trumps all. How many good query letters get you an advance and royalties? That's just a silly thing to say.

And, um, their guidelines seem a little OCD to me. But that's just me being difficult. ;-)

However, not to drag this agency down, I checked P&E and they have no concerns there, and they appear to have many books sold and in submission. So if you can handle the guidelines, more power to you!

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Lisa McMann said:
Well, think about Harry Potter. What are they? Well over 120k, I'd guess (I have no idea).

I don't think 70k is too much for an average YA, either.

harry potter isn't a good standard for a number of reasons

A) JK Rowling has amnesty for everthing.
B) Previously-published authors are given a lot more leeway than newbies
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C)Her first book came out around a decade ago--things have changed dramatically since then.


Also, I think the OCD agent's word count is the same thing as putting all your margins at 1" and multiplying the number of pages by 250
 

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Good points on harry potter, Elektra.

To use a more recent first-time author, Stephenie Meyer's "Twilight" is around 130k, I think. It's probably one of the longest books in the YA market right now. I wouldn't (couldn't) write one anywhere near that long. 40-70k sounds reasonable. But there are exceptions.

I guess all I'm trying to say is don't box yourself in with a bunch of rules. :)
 

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Lisa McMann said:
Ahhh...sorry -- I didn't click on your link until now.

Um... what does this sentence mean to you (from their guidelines): You will impress us more with a good query letter than with a well-written novel.

Hello? Yes, the query is important. But good writing trumps all. How many good query letters get you an advance and royalties? That's just a silly thing to say.

And, um, their guidelines seem a little OCD to me. But that's just me being difficult. ;-)

However, not to drag this agency down, I checked P&E and they have no concerns there, and they appear to have many books sold and in submission. So if you can handle the guidelines, more power to you!

:D

Thank you for checking Lisa, kimmi
 

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What I did was get a lot of books at the library that were similar to mine and looked to be aimed at the same reading/age level. Then I (by hand) counted words on their pages. There was a bit of variation, but I found that the average hovered right around 250 (you'll find that the younger the readers, the fewer words per page, so the age bracket for your book might have a different number of average words per page).

Next, I went looking on Amazon.com for books that were similar to mine in subject, seemed aimed at the same age level, and had been published recently. I'd look at the page count for each book (which is right there on Amazon) and multiply it by 250 words per page to get the total word count for that book. Once I'd gotten a bunch of these word counts and had a range, I looked at my book's word count and saw that it was in the higher middle part of the range.

I wouldn't worry unless your book is outside the range. And, even if it is slightly outside that range, the most likely thing is that you'll probably be asked if you can cut a bit.
 

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40,000 is short-ish, but it sounds fine to me. My YA that's getting published is 22,000. THAT is little. My point is there's always a market. Don't try to ruin a good thing by expanding/contracting.
 

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mine's just under 50,000 and will be released in the fall. it actually started out as a short story... and wouldn't go away until it grew into a novel. anyway, the publisher i submitted to gives 45-50,000 as a guideline for YA submissions, for what that's worth.
 
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