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LannyAD

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Hey, all. How's it going?

Anyway, I searched through all of the extremely helpful threads before I even dared to start a new post, but I just had to!

Found a post about writing dialect with was great, but it appeared to be pretty old and didn't hit what I'm thinking.

How do you all feel about using "-in'" instead of "ing" when writing dialogue? Not every time an action is used, of course, but I'm writing characters from Missouri. We don't use the "G" at the end too often around here.

"Well, I was thinkin' about you."

To me it gives a little more realism to the person, but is it annoying to look at? All those apostrophes do look a little cluttery sometimes.

Thanks a boat load!
 

Jim Riley

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I used "in" (among others) in dialogue with Louisiana & South Mississippi characters. It's more authentic for us.

Welcome to AW.

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Welcome to the Water Cooler!

:welcome:

AW is a huge place, and there's a lot of information to be found here. Take your time and browse around to get a feel of the various forums.

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Welcome. I think dropping the G would be okay. Just don't go as far as Mark Twain did in Huck Finn. I liked the story, but I couldn't stand the dialect. Also, what part of Missouri are you from? I'm from the St. Louis area, and I don't usually drop my G's. Of course, in some of the more rural parts of the state, you notice that more. Like when I went to school in Kirksville.
 

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Welcome LannyAD

Well I drop a lot of letters when I'm drunk and people wouldn't seem to care in real life or they do care but they don't show it for one reason or or another
 

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Welcome! I use it in my writing, just not to often or I feel it becomes a distraction...my rule of thumb is whatever makes the story better for the reader.
 

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Hi!

It would probably work for one particular character in a story, because that's his way of speaking. But for everyone in your MS—could be too much?

I wrote a short story about two farmer friends, and one of them spoke like that. That was part of his character. Did I just say that? :)
 

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So long as it isn't overused.
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Welcome, I think "in" is a great idea - but like all else, it should be used appropriately. For example, too much description can work against a story, much like very little description. You have to find a good middle. Hope to see you around!
 

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