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12-22-2012, 01:18 PM
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2012
Location: Southeast Missouri
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Beta for a traditional adult horror short
Hi all. I need a few betas to critique a 7500 word horror short. The protag is a 15-year old, but it's definitely adult horror. No glittery vamps. No romance. It's strictly horror. Very strong language and violence. Any critiques will be appreciated: line edits, plot holes, anything and everything. Be blunt or nice, just give me the truth. In exchange, I'll read something of yours when needed.
There's an old excerpt (second draft) of it in the SYW Horror room, currently on page 4 (sorry, I don't know how to link it.) Thanks!!! |
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12-22-2012, 05:44 PM
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Soaking up information.
Join Date: Feb 2012
Location: a state of contentment
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Pmd you
L.
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12-24-2012, 09:00 PM
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more things in heaven and earth
Join Date: Jul 2012
Location: USA
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I'll read it. Send it to me....
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12-27-2012, 10:38 AM
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2012
Location: Southeast Missouri
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L. Blake and Haunted. Thanks. I've sent PMs with the story attached to both of you.
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12-27-2012, 09:07 PM
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practical experience, FTW
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12-27-2012, 10:18 PM
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practical experience, FTW
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I sent you a PM with the story. Any comments or suggestions will be greatly appreciated. Thanks!!! |
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12-28-2012, 06:31 AM
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Never got a pm.
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12-28-2012, 10:48 PM
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12-28-2012, 11:18 PM
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Never got it there either. Pm it to me.
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12-29-2012, 09:15 AM
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practical experience, FTW
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Location: Southeast Missouri
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I sent another copy by PM. Thanks!!!!!!! |
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12-31-2012, 09:14 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2012
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I'd love to if you send me a PM, huge horror fan.
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01-01-2013, 07:58 AM
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01-02-2013, 03:50 AM
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space opera-popcorn lover!
Join Date: Jun 2012
Location: Northern Ireland
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If you're still lookng and don't mind a newbie (I do a fair bit of critting, though), i am up for it. I have a pretty good horror pedigree. Pm me if you like, no probs if not.
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01-02-2013, 04:51 AM
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