inciting incident vs. plot points

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For a while, I've been wondering about the difference between the inciting incident and major plot points, and I've been confused about it for a while. I had always thought that the inciting incident and plot points were two different things in a novel. What is the difference between them and when should the inciting incident occur in a YA novel in the historical fiction genre?
 

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Stories can have many major and minor plot points. The inciting incident is the first major plot point.
 

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The inciting incident is the first thing that happens that gets teh ball rolling (and also a plot point)

Other plot points occur as you go on.

It help to look at inciting incident as 'the point where it starts to turn to crap' :D The inciting incident doesn't even need to be shown in the work, it could happen before it starts (I've done one of those). Maybe you'll start with the fallout from that one thing (that too). Maybe it'll be in chapter one. (yup) Maybe a little later (yup) but you'll need to set that incident up in those first pages. If you haven't got to it fairly soonish though, you might want to rethink.
 

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The inciting incident is the first thing that happens that gets teh ball rolling (and also a plot point)


This is how I understand it.

It is the thing that changes the MC's life and starts the story (whether it is big or small).

It is Bella moving to Forks.
Harry getting a letter from Hogwarts.
Katniss volunteering to take Prim's place in the Hunger Games.

It should happen early in the story if not the first chapter, IMO.
 
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Does the situation that the author decides to be the inciting incident have to be a bad thing?
 

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no. it's just a source of conflict. think going to a new school.

however, you're coming at this from a very plot-centric model. don't forget about the character-centric model. you wouldn't necessarily be focusing on an inciting incident, but a core event, the thing that shaped all the baggage of the character, the source of their motivation for story logic, and THAT is usually a bad thing.
 

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I think of the 'inciting incident' as the point where everything irrevocably changes. It's not bad or good, IMO... Just a beginning. The event can set the mood for the rest of the book, so for a introspective, character-driven plot, you might not want a thrilling, high adrenalin incident. A moment of drama might be perfect for a YA but not so much for a murder mystery.
 

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I'm always amazed that just when I think I've heard all the terms, a new one is introduced. I never heard of inciting incident before and now I've heard it several times in several different threads just this week.

Me, too, but at least it's self-explanatory, unlike, say, 'plot bunny'.

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The inciting event is nothing more than a disturbance that upsets the status quo and forces the hero to act. It doesn't have to be something bad. A visiting uncle. A phone call from a friend in need. Leia's message when R2D2 gets cleaned in Star Wars.

The point of no return is where the hero is so tangled into the plot that he/she cannot backtrack out of it. Luke finds his uncle and aunt dead and realizes he had become a fugitive in Star Wars.

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