What do you think of this ???

dragoninja98 · Jun 22, 2011

This is one of my short stories i wrote.... Please read it and give me a critical analysis ad also tell me how to and where to improve in my writing style.
I will be really thankful....
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Guardian · Jun 22, 2011

I think this post needs to be in SYW.

dpaterso · Jun 22, 2011

Nope, sorry, link removed.

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What do you think of this ???

dragoninja98

Guardian

just the worst honestly

dpaterso

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