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Fantasy books are some of the worst culprits when it comes to info dumps. Because of that I've really cut back on the amount of facts I've tried to tuck into my novel. This morning I saw a question on Yahoo Answers that mentioned Harry Potter, and the comments all praised the worldbuilding and the amount of detail JK Rowling managed to slip in.
So... How do you thread lots of facts into your novel without slowing it down? I read somewhere that you need to make it all relevant to the story, but I'm sure that about 99% of the stuff in Harry Potter wasn't directly relevant or necessary (okay, nowhere near 99%, but you know what I mean). On the other hand, if those things weren't there, the story wouldn't have been as rich.
Harry Potter has whole chunks devoted to introducing or explaining the workings of different aspects of the magical world (Quidditch, House Elves, moving pictures, weird sweets, etc). When I put scenes like this in my story, alarm bells go off in my head. They say "this isn't direcly related to the plot, cut it" or "careful, you're only writing what you like to read -- people will get bored". I even get nervous even when I work them around short subplots, because the subplots aren't necessary. Harry Potter really lends itself to worldbuilding/exposition since the kids are learning at a school, but I really want to know how other books manage it.
Do I have more leaway, since I am writing fantasy and people expect (sometimes even hope for) details. Or should I focus on the plot and only reveal whatever comes up?
So... How do you thread lots of facts into your novel without slowing it down? I read somewhere that you need to make it all relevant to the story, but I'm sure that about 99% of the stuff in Harry Potter wasn't directly relevant or necessary (okay, nowhere near 99%, but you know what I mean). On the other hand, if those things weren't there, the story wouldn't have been as rich.
Harry Potter has whole chunks devoted to introducing or explaining the workings of different aspects of the magical world (Quidditch, House Elves, moving pictures, weird sweets, etc). When I put scenes like this in my story, alarm bells go off in my head. They say "this isn't direcly related to the plot, cut it" or "careful, you're only writing what you like to read -- people will get bored". I even get nervous even when I work them around short subplots, because the subplots aren't necessary. Harry Potter really lends itself to worldbuilding/exposition since the kids are learning at a school, but I really want to know how other books manage it.
Do I have more leaway, since I am writing fantasy and people expect (sometimes even hope for) details. Or should I focus on the plot and only reveal whatever comes up?
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