This may not be the right place for this, but I am curious about something and would like to get some honest opinions.
How much is too much detail?
I like detail. I like backstory. Heck, I even like info dumping if it is done right. I always read prologues.
I read all genres and I'm currently trying to write an epic fantasy. Well, fantasy doesn't really describe it, but that is as close as I can come. My WIP has an ensemble cast, with the storyline of the first book focusing on 5 MCs. I am trying--trying being the key word here--to write third person limited.
On my first several go rounds I had the three female MCs as child hood friends(they are adults now) but ran into plotline problems, plus I always ended up info dumping, and not the done right kind. So I have decided on a short prologue, then each of the first three chapters will be from one MC's POV, with them melding in the fourth.
This is where the detail and back story problem come in. Each of the three women will be making a major, life changing decision. They will be, therefore, examining there lives and thinking about the past alot.
From reading the crits and advice on here, I get the impression that most people want the beginning of a book to be action orientated, with just tidbits of info and back story scattered here and there. I am trying to write my WIP as something I would like to read. I almost exclusively read series, no matter the genre. Which means detail and back story at the start, not a great deal of action driven conflict until later on in the story.
So my question is--As a reader, would you honestly toss the book if the beginning was a bit slow in the action department? How far in would you read? I see a lot of crits that say--"You story starts here, not where you started it." That drives me crazy. I will admit, I have read some things where that is a legitimate crit, but usually it seems to me the critter just wants to start at the action sequence. I love Star Wars, but will never read the books. Why? Because the storyline is mostly visual. Light saber fights and space ships in battle bore me on the written page, and I tend to skim over them. But on the screen? I am totally there.
My story line is a bit complex, but not overwhelming. I have described it as a soap opera elsewhere, and I think that puts off some people, but the structure is similar. I want to focus on the relationships, and the details, and have a great storyline too. It's a daunting task, I know, but one I will attempt anyway.
So, am I the only weird person in the world that actually likes back story? Is there an audience for detail driven storyline, combined with action and suspense?
I will write this story regardless, but it would be nice to know I am not the only weirdo out there, lol.
How much is too much detail?
I like detail. I like backstory. Heck, I even like info dumping if it is done right. I always read prologues.
I read all genres and I'm currently trying to write an epic fantasy. Well, fantasy doesn't really describe it, but that is as close as I can come. My WIP has an ensemble cast, with the storyline of the first book focusing on 5 MCs. I am trying--trying being the key word here--to write third person limited.
On my first several go rounds I had the three female MCs as child hood friends(they are adults now) but ran into plotline problems, plus I always ended up info dumping, and not the done right kind. So I have decided on a short prologue, then each of the first three chapters will be from one MC's POV, with them melding in the fourth.
This is where the detail and back story problem come in. Each of the three women will be making a major, life changing decision. They will be, therefore, examining there lives and thinking about the past alot.
From reading the crits and advice on here, I get the impression that most people want the beginning of a book to be action orientated, with just tidbits of info and back story scattered here and there. I am trying to write my WIP as something I would like to read. I almost exclusively read series, no matter the genre. Which means detail and back story at the start, not a great deal of action driven conflict until later on in the story.
So my question is--As a reader, would you honestly toss the book if the beginning was a bit slow in the action department? How far in would you read? I see a lot of crits that say--"You story starts here, not where you started it." That drives me crazy. I will admit, I have read some things where that is a legitimate crit, but usually it seems to me the critter just wants to start at the action sequence. I love Star Wars, but will never read the books. Why? Because the storyline is mostly visual. Light saber fights and space ships in battle bore me on the written page, and I tend to skim over them. But on the screen? I am totally there.
My story line is a bit complex, but not overwhelming. I have described it as a soap opera elsewhere, and I think that puts off some people, but the structure is similar. I want to focus on the relationships, and the details, and have a great storyline too. It's a daunting task, I know, but one I will attempt anyway.
So, am I the only weird person in the world that actually likes back story? Is there an audience for detail driven storyline, combined with action and suspense?
I will write this story regardless, but it would be nice to know I am not the only weirdo out there, lol.
