Actually, those are really good rules.
It's really up to the director to decide what camera angles to use, and it always sounds wierd when someone uses the word "we". But Fade in and Fade out, are also sort of like camera directions. It's up to the director to decide if the screen should go black or not. It's suggested we don't use any transitions at all except FADE IN: at the begining, and FADE OUT: at the end. You've already got your SUPER there, so there really isn't any need for it. As for the other stuff, I would consider putting the scene heading first, then the HOLO-T.V. shot with the woman reporter. Like I said before, the scene heading is basically there to let the directors know where to set up. It doesn't really make any difference to your T.V. scene. Besides that, I am assuming the holographic image of the reporter isn't standing in the middle of some dark abyss somewhere, and we're more than likely going to see tidbits of the actual surroundings during the shot.
Just my thoughts. But it's your choice. I'm not an expert, so I can't say it's right or wrong either way.
Steph
