What do I look for in a Fantasy book?
One thing I’d suggest is to make sure the story is original and intriguing. By that I mean if you’re going to have magic etc., make sure you don’t make it so it seems like a Harry Potter knockoff or a LOTR knockoff etc. That’s one of my biggest turnoffs in Fantasy is when a book is simply not that original and comes across like a rehash of stuff already written or is a mirror image of another writer’s world.
And it can’t be predictable. By which I mean it’s a storyline that’s been done to death and I can see what’s gonna happen a mile away. All the great books I’ve read were great because the author kept surprising me, kept me on my toes, left me wondering what was gonna happen next. The author always had another trick to pull out of his hat. Another kink in the works. Another card from his deck. Everybody loves surprises, especially readers.
Another thing is characters. Three-dimensional characters that I can relate to. Too often in Fantasy stories, the characters are either Syrupy-sweet Totally Good Stardust-in-the-Eyes types or Venomous, Evil and Repugnant Totally Bad types. They come across as unrealistic when the good guys can do no wrong and the bad guys can do no right. Not only am I not like that but I’ve never in my life met anyone like that.
Make the characters human, with the full scope of human emotion and then place them in situations that will show the reader those emotions. Touch upon the human essence, the commonality of all people.
One of my favorite movies is a love story (and believe me, I’m not a love story kind of guy.) Why? Because I was able to relate to the main character. Every time I see the movie, I’m gripped because I see myself in the main character.
For instance, if you’re going to write a YA fantasy you’re going to want to make sure that the character(s) face problems and situations that your reader will likely face, deal with emotions that your readers will likely be dealing with at that stage of their life.
Love, Loss, Sacrifice, Betrayal, Hope, Redemption – these are tunes that will strike a chord in the majority of people who’ve experienced life. If you can show these things in a believable fashion, your reader will likely be able to relate.
I believe good writing is actually about manipulation. If you can pull the right strings in your reader they’ll become fans.