Have Editors had their day?

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I read it....it was a good and detailed article. It certainly does seem that the pile-em-high-sell-em-cheap attitude to book releases means much less time for editing. That said though, I've seen several articles that suggest the publishing industry is looking to reign in the numbers of books they release each year....as it's gotten out of hand now, and too many books are being released without any marketing and sinking without a trace because the booksellers can't find shelf space for them. So....if the numbers of books being released does come down, then presumably there'll be more time for editors to edit.

My first book has been through a couple of revisions....I was reluctant to make the changes my editor asked for, but now, I can see it's a much better book. So I think on reflection I'm quite glad that I have a proactive editor. That said....a tiny part of me is always suspicious that an editor, under pressure from the marketing dept, is massaging the book to fit their requirements. I recall an anecdote of a writer who writes Roman military novels, but who was asked to make his debut of the military series...a Roman crime thriller, because the publisher didn't have a Roman-crime-thriller in the works when it was the latest bandwagon a few years back. The writer stuck to his guns and is doing very well. Good on him.
 

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I hope for more information on this topic. It is certain that some fantasy novels are being released with little or no editing.
 

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Vomaxx said:
I hope for more information on this topic. It is certain that some fantasy novels are being released with little or no editing.

Wanna bet? Unless you've seen the first draft, you have no idea how much editing went into a novel.
 

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I've read two novels in the past year (not fantasy) that were horrible no matter what angle you come from (story, plot, characterization, quality of writing). If they were edited, then either the manuscripts were so lousy to begin with that they should never have been acquired (both books were written by previously published authors), or the editors should be fired.
 

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I've had two opposing experiences lately:

First, I worked with an agent (not my agent-- my client's agent) who was intensely involved in the proposal. It was heartwarming. He's a former editor and it shows... the proposal went through several incarnations, and he offered suggestions and edits every step of the way until we were all happy with it. It was more editing than I get from most editors, and very collaborative in spirit and in practice.

Second, an editor (at a very big house) wrote to suggest that the manuscript I turned in could go straight to mechanicals (proofs) and we'd edit from there. I'd love to puff myself up and think that's because the ms was in such great shape that it needs nothing more than a tiny bit of clean-up work, but in truth, I know it's that she's behind in her own work. It feels like cutting corners.

It's a funny dance. Of course I turn in my work with the fantasy that the editor will say, "Perfect! Don't change a thing!" But then I'm highly suspicious when it happens. ;) It's such a gift when you find an editor who understands your work and merely wants to help you make it shiny. You learn so much from the good ones, whereas the bad ones just leave you feeling violated... or neglected.
 

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I first got suspicious about my last book (a collection of celebrity interviews) when I was about half way done and I asked my editor what he thought of it so far. He said it was just great and recited from the table of contents. I really should have asked him which interviews he liked best and why, but I didn't want to put him on the spot.
Later, when the book came out, virtually untouched, I was pretty sure only the assistant really read any of it.
Sure enough, the first--and most major--review said "this book could have used some editing."
(Let alone the fact that I usually average about three or four editors per book, losing them not only to other houses, but to other professions, grad school, pregnancy, etc.)
What I miss most is feedback. In some senses the editor should be your ideal reader. If not, you can go through book after book never finding one.
 

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I've read two novels in the past year (not fantasy) that were horrible no matter what angle you come from (story, plot, characterization, quality of writing). If they were edited, then either the manuscripts were so lousy to begin with that they should never have been acquired (both books were written by previously published authors), or the editors should be fired.

Well, I'd ask who published them, and what you, as editor, would have changed. Good editors never, ever mess with a writer's style, and never have. And the writer should be the one who knows what a good story and a good plot and good characterization are.

All an editor does, all a good editor does, is try to put the final bit of editing on a novel that makes it as good as it can get, and without changing a writer's style or voice. No editor can turn a bad novel into a good one, or a bad writer into a good one.

I'd also want to know which books those were, and whether or not the majority of readers felt the same way you did about them?

Were these things bad, or is it just that you didn't like them? If they are bad, those novels will stop selling, and that writer will be out of a job. The editor might well be out of a job, as well. Editors who do not consistently buy books the public likes generally get fired very quickly.

Now, there are certainly some bad editors out there, but most often they're the ones who edit too much instead of too little. There are more publishers now than ever, and there are more editors now than ever. Far more. Some few just aren't going to be any good at what they do. These few will get replaced, but there will always be bad editors. Always have been. It makes no sense to think all those in any profession are all going to be great at their job.

Likelwise, it also makes no sense to think editors today don;t do a great job because you read two novels that you think weren't any good. You may be right. Maybe those two novels could have stood a great deal more editing. And you may be completely wrong, and the editor did exactly the job she was supposed to do, which is to publish novels the majority of her readers will enjoy. Once writers reach teh gettign published stage, good and bad are largely subjective. I've heard the same comments about the novels of darned near every published writer out there. Bad writing, bad plotting, bad characterization, etc. Sometimes these comments are accurate, but far more often than not they mean nothing except that reader did not like that writer.

But people, particularly wannabe writers, seem to have a really odd notion of what an editor's job really is, and this iis often brought about by mythical tales of a never did exist time when all editors were wonderful, and would turn the work of any writer into deathless prose.

It si essentially teh writer's job to write a good novel. It is the writer's job to come up with a good story, with good characters, and with prose that's the best that writer can do. It's the editor's job to find writers who can do these things. Always has been.

But anyone who thinks novels do not get edited these days, often more than they should, has purely and simply never been through the editing process, or simply doesn't understand an editor's job. That job is not to be a writer, and that job is not to turn bad into good.

An editor's job is to find good writers, which means writers who can please the majority of teh reading public, and then to help those writers put a finishing touch on the novel that makes it as good as it can be, which may be very good, or may be mediocre. But editors can only work with the material that's submitted to them, and there are, unfortunately, more good editors than there are good writers.

This said, editors routinely work mioracles. They cut, polish, edit, tighten, suggest and implore. But they do not and cannot turn bad writing into good writing, or bad novels into good novels. When the writing really is bad, when the stories and characters really are bad, the editor should not buy that novel, but it's the writer's lack of talent that makes these things bad, not the editor's lack of editing.

And as I said, just because any of us think a couple of novels we read are bad in every way in no measure means they were. That's a decision that requires a concensus, and that concensus shows in sales numbers. Some few really bad novels will sell well, and some extremely few good novels won't sell at all, but these are the aberrations.

Neither means editors do not edit. Some few editors are lousy at their job, most are pretty good, and some are as good as any editor who ever lived, and pretty much every last one of them tries very hard.

Those who gripe at editors should find a way to spend a month or so watching them work. The amount of editing they do is unbelievable. Those who gripe too much should spend more time learning how to write well, and less time worrying about editors. Writer's who can't write well do not need to look at editors to cast blame, and writers who can't edit their own work to a professional state are living in a fantasy world.
 

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Well, I'd ask who published them, and what you, as editor, would have changed.
Simon & Schuster was one of them. Bella Books was another. What would I have changed? A hell of a lot. The two books I'm talking about aren't marginal--they're horrible by any standard.

Good editors never, ever mess with a writer's style, and never have.
No, but you'd expect them to correct things like blatant POV violations when a book is supposed to be written in 3rd person limited, as you know Bob dialogue, stilted dialogue, dangling modifiers, overuse of the verb "to be" (like in every friggin' sentence), etcetera, etcetera.

Were these things bad, or is it just that you didn't like them?
No, I've said before in many posts that I'm a very forgiving reader as long as the story and characters are good. I can overlook a lot. For me to notice the writing means that the writing is very, very bad.

Now, there are certainly some bad editors out there, but most often they're the ones who edit too much instead of too little.
I suspect the author at Simon & Schuster received no editing. The one at Bella Books thanks her editor in the acknowledgements-- as far as I'm concerned, the editor is incompetent.

Likelwise, it also makes no sense to think editors today don;t do a great job because you read two novels that you think weren't any good.
Never said it did.

But people, particularly wannabe writers
I'm speaking as a reader who expects at least passably competent writing in books published by commercial publishers. If much of your post wasn't meant to address me specifically (and I don't see how it could have been since you're addressing points I never made), then please make your points without quoting my post. It's common courtesy to do so on boards like these.

As far as my post went, pointing out that two books didn't receive enough editing isn't a statement about ALL editors or a statement that NO books get editing--it's a statement that I know of at least two books that definitely required more editing. You have a lot of valuable things to say and I read your posts with interest, but refusing to acknowledge that anybody in publishing ever screws up does detract from your credibility at times. It's silly and defensive to take pot shots at anyone who criticizes a book and suggests that more editing (or a better editor) might have helped.
 

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This subject is so very discouraging.

Too many new authors.
Too many new editors.
Too many new agents.
Too many publishers.

Not enough room on the shelves for books.

I think I’ve heard something like this. Is this what everyone is saying?

I think I’ve heard where some ones work they’ve submitted is lost in some black hole for months.

It seams as though there are less Hollywood movies out now, and it seems as though they’ve become less interesting to me.

If all of this is so, when is the marketing world, the publishers and agents going to step up to the microphone and tell it like it is? People have become proficient with the new tools to writing stories and are turning them out like pregnant rabbits and they are clueless to what is facing them.

I would say this is the most discouraging topic of the month, if not the year.
 

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Simon & Schuster was one of them. Bella Books was another. What would I have changed? A hell of a lot. The two books I'm talking about aren't marginal--they're horrible by any standard.


No, but you'd expect them to correct things like blatant POV violations when a book is supposed to be written in 3rd person limited, as you know Bob dialogue, stilted dialogue, dangling modifiers, overuse of the verb "to be" (like in every friggin' sentence), etcetera, etcetera.


No, I've said before in many posts that I'm a very forgiving reader as long as the story and characters are good. I can overlook a lot. For me to notice the writing means that the writing is very, very bad.


I suspect the author at Simon & Schuster received no editing. The one at Bella Books thanks her editor in the acknowledgements-- as far as I'm concerned, the editor is incompetent.


Never said it did.


I'm speaking as a reader who expects at least passably competent writing in books published by commercial publishers. If much of your post wasn't meant to address me specifically (and I don't see how it could have been since you're addressing points I never made), then please make your points without quoting my post. It's common courtesy to do so on boards like these.

As far as my post went, pointing out that two books didn't receive enough editing isn't a statement about ALL editors or a statement that NO books get editing--it's a statement that I know of at least two books that definitely required more editing. You have a lot of valuable things to say and I read your posts with interest, but refusing to acknowledge that anybody in publishing ever screws up does detract from your credibility at times. It's silly and defensive to take pot shots at anyone who criticizes a book and suggests that more editing (or a better editor) might have helped.

Maybe you did read two such novels, but I'll reserve judgement until I read them Simon & Shuster has a number of the best , and hardest working, editors in the business. I guarantee any novel pubished there was edited.

And as I said. What were the novels?

I never said no one screws up. I said any profession is going to have some bad people in it, and publishing is no different. But bad editors do not last. The average lifespan of an editor, depending on the size of the pubisher, is from three to six years. This turnover is largely because an editor who does not do a good job editing is soon fired.

I did not mean to take potshots, I'm simply stating that from my experience, editors, by and large, do an extremly good job, and do a LOT of editing. Aying those novels are bad by anyone's standards is what seems a gross overstatement to me. But without knowing just hwat those two novels wewre, it's impossible to tell, isn' it?

The truth is purely and simply that from my experience I do not see many novels published that an editor could have done much more with than he or she did.

Some editors, many editors, do correct POV violations, others do not, but it isn't because they aren't editing, it's because some editors prefer to let the writers write, and some writers make POV violations work.

For you to notice theriting may indeed mean it's very, very bad. It may also merely mean you don' like the writing, and that many others who read the novels will think the writing is fine.

I repeat, an editor' job is not to be a writer, and no editor who's any good messes with a writer's style.

But this aside, I never said you didn' read two very badly written novels that needed editing. It's entirely possible you did. But it's also possible you read two novels that you simply didn' like. But with two two examples, you can't even necessarily indict those two editors, let alone an industry.

We're simply going to have to agree to disagree. I find many published novels that I do not like. I very, very seldom find one where the editing is at fault.
 

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brinkett said:
If they were edited, then either the manuscripts were so lousy to begin with that they should never have been acquired (both books were written by previously published authors), or the editors should be fired.
Or the author refused any editing. *Cough* Jordan, Rice *Cough*
 

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Jamesaritchie said:
I never said no one screws up. I said any profession is going to have some bad people in it, and publishing is no different. But bad editors do not last. The average lifespan of an editor, depending on the size of the pubisher, is from three to six years. This turnover is largely because an editor who does not do a good job editing is soon fired.

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James, the article didn't saythat editors today are necessarily bad - justthat they don't have time to edit or to give as much attention as they'd like to a book. My editor was briliant with my first book. SHe seemed to see things that I didn't, made suggestions that really took the story to a whole new level. Butthat book was finished before I delivered it. The next two books were written to a contract and already there was a deadline hanging over us. I knew for a fact that both needed much more time, another lookk through fromher, another polishing by myself but there was no time. The last draft I wrote of both, I didn't even have the time to read through it one more time before delivery, and I'm sure she didn't. I couldn't even bear to read it once published, I was so ashamed! The third book had a lot of flab that needed cutting, but againwe were both rushed. Luckily, I suggested that it be cut between the hardback and paperback editions, and that's what we did. But I know more could have ben done.

I've said this before but the HarperCollins chick lit novel PS I Love you was so devoid of editing it was an embarassment. The writing was that of a schoolgirl, cliches all over the place, entire telephone conversations with all the useless chat that should not be in a novel, repetitions of descriptions. A person in shock looks like a goldfish every time, or their hands fly to their mouths, or they giggle hysterically on almost every page. That's no exagerration. The story was not bad but needed some severe editing.
 

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Jamesaritchie said:
Maybe you did read two such novels, but I'll reserve judgement until I read them Simon & Shuster has a number of the best , and hardest working, editors in the business. I guarantee any novel pubished there was edited.

And as I said. What were the novels?
I've PMed you the names. I don't like naming specific novels publicly. I doubt very much the Simon & Schuster one was edited because it's just so bad. If it was edited, the editor should do something else for a living.

Or the author refused any editing. *Cough* Jordan, Rice *Cough*
Yes, that's possible, but then you'd think the publisher would refuse to publish the book. That's what would happen to a first time writer that refused editing.
 

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Yes, I know. What does that say?
 

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brinkett said:
I've PMed you the names. I don't like naming specific novels publicly. I doubt very much the Simon & Schuster one was edited because it's just so bad. If it was edited, the editor should do something else for a living.

That's a good policy - I've thought about the ethics of that myself - what if the author of that book is lurking here, for instance! Or what if I were to lurk on some board nad see them talking negatively about me! But I decided that i'm Ok with that.
 

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Ultimately, I would blame it on the fact that nearly every publishing house in America has been operating on a skeleton crew for quite some time now. It would amaze me if editors actually had time to read all their e-mails and shuffle all the paper they have to shuffle in the course of a day, let alone actually read, digest and comment on a manuscript. What's sad is that this has probably been going on for years, but it's only now gotten to the point where someone notices enough to write about it.

It also doesn't help that we seem to be rather firmly entrenched in an auteur society these days, where the prerogative of the original artist (in whatever medium) is seen as sacrosanct and immune to tampering. Never mind that that "tampering" is often what produces the best result in the first place. Art always has been a communal effort. It's only lately that the individual artist has been placed on such a lofty pedestal.

Oh well.
 

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Euan H. said:
Or the author refused any editing. *Cough* Jordan, Rice *Cough*
You're wrong. So's everyone who agreed with you.

Yeah, Anne Rice made a big noise about not getting edited. Most likely that means she doesn't, but it's not a sure thing. The truest words said so far in this thread came from James Ritchie: If you didn't see the marks on the manuscript, the editorial correspondence, and the copyediting and proofreading, you can't be sure you know what happened.

(Personally, I can easily believe Rice doesn't get edited. If she's willing to make that much of a flap about it, and if it doesn't make a huge difference in her sales, trying to edit her would be more trouble than it's worth.)

Robert Jordan is where you seriously go astray. Robert Jordan -- that is, James Rigney -- is married to an accomplished and highly respected editor who has decades of hands-on experience in the industry. And when he and his wife are finished with the latest manuscript, it gets sent out to the best copyeditor in the genre, who gives it a thorough going-over.

There are things authors always say about The Way Things Used To Be, a.k.a. Back Then: a period which they generally identify as having ended about ten or twenty years before they started selling. Back then, a writer could make a decent living, not just scrape by. Back then, editors used to edit. Back then, publishing wasn't just about money: people really cared about books. (Yeah, right. And the fishing was better too, and children were respectful of their elders.) Twenty years from now, they'll be saying the same thing about those halcyon days at the turn of the millennium.

Here are a few of the other things authors may mean when they say editors don't edit:
If editors did as much "editing" (by which the author usually means line-by-line, word-by-word text cleanup) as they used to, my book would be publishable as it stands.

I don't feel like my editor pays enough attention to me.

My book as published was no better than it was when I wrote it.

I don't see how
[thus-and-such book], which got published, and which is not to my taste, is all that much better than My Own Beloved Book, which was rejected.
And so forth and so on.

Do editors edit? Some do, sure. Others do it less. Almost all editors do it situationally.
 

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For my money, I'm with the 'too many books - too few editors' argument. I think most editors are incredibly snowed-under with work, I'm pretty certain most if not all of them are so busy during office hours with meetings and office work, that the actual reading-editing comes home on the train with them and they have to fit it into their out-of-work hours.

I won't profess to knowing this....but I suspect it from my humble dealings thus far, and the fact that the publishing industry has done a lot of talking recently about cutting down on the numbers of books being published.
 

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HapiSofi said:
The truest words said so far in this thread came from James Ritchie: edit? Some do, sure. Others do it less. Almost all editors do it situationally.

I object: my words were also true -at least - those in my second post, about my editor.. It was a personal experience, I can say it is 100% true that she did not edit enough. She did two rush jobs.
 

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HapiSofi said:
Do editors edit? Some do, sure. Others do it less. Almost all editors do it situationally.
Well, I hope some books aren't being edited then, because if they are, the quality of editing is slipping into the toilet. All I can say is that as someone who's been reading for more years than I care to admit, I've noticed a decline in the quality of the writing in published novels (and stupid stuff, like more spelling errors slipping through), and I'm a very forgiving reader.

As far as Robert Jordan goes, I thought advancing the plot in a 500+ page novel would be desirable. I guess I'll rethink that. ;)
 

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Having been in and around publishing for the better part of a decade, I do find myself wondering about the skill level of people in the industry lately.

I'm a perfect example. My actual degree is in Fine Arts - Painting, with a minor in English. Yet the level of editorial work I've been called on to do over the course of my career ranges from a little odd to downright ridiculous. By now, it's probably all the same, given the professional experience, but if a relatively unqualified person like me has been asked to act as editor, how bad must it be for an actual professional?

Frankly, fewer books would be a great idea. Of course, that doesn't do my chances for publication any favors, but at least I'd have some decent books to read while I wait.
 
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