Fantabulous February 500 Words a Day Thread

Ken Hoss

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Yeah, getting a jump on this one. Heard this used many years ago while serving in the U.S. Navy and it kind of stuck with me. (A combination of Fantastic and Fabulous) You could even use "fantabulistic".

Good luck to each and everyone this month, and may February find us all Fantabulous! :D
 

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It's fantabulous! :D:D:D I love that word. I occasionally explain it to my students in class haha. Along with such other gems as awesometastic. ;)

Anyway, not getting a darn thing done on Saturday put me behind, but I finally finished going through my manuscript, fixing the minor errors, and formatting it in purdy manuscript format and sent off my full. Woohoo! :D Hopefully I'll have some more real words tomorrow. I did figure out something really big about my climax so I'm pretty happy about that. I only have one class tomorrow (woohoo again!), but I also need to get stuff done for work and do some more job application stuff, so we'll see how much time I end up with.

Wee February! And it might snow tonight! :D
 

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February is THE month of the year for me. My last marking period for high school, biggest party of the year, my book is going to be complete, and I'm getting my university offers.

So it better be fantabulous!
 

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Go, Eddyz! That's some seriously fantastic fantabulous stuff!
 

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Had a little trouble finding the new digs- must be the fever- you guys weren't hiding it from me- were you?

300 words yesterday- zip so far today-
 

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That reminds me, someone fetch Hettie into the new month please... We'll have to start that service for shea, too. :)
 

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Up to about 1900 words on the rewrite. It's been like pulling teeth, but I let my alpha reader look at it today and she likes it. Sometimes I get so close to the writing I lose all perspective.

Still looking for more comments on the short story I posted (link in my signature). My writer's group had good suggestions which I'm mulling over.

:Sun: and :poke:, everyone!
 

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2000 words today with the wee one off at school and all the out-of-town company gone. Whew!

But I may have written myself into a corner. We'll see. It's either going to be breath-takingly shocking or a dud.
 

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1500 (or so) words today- but I'm not sure about plausability- I am doing pre - edits and have a chance to change things before the MS gets 'nuked' and plugged into my publishers system- i mever liked this one part, but now I wonder if i just wrote something totally unbeleivable-

I don't suppose anyone would be willing to look at on page of crap for me?
 

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After seeing everyone else's amazing word counts for today, I'm tempted not to post mine. Well, okay. A measly 428, and that includes what I posted on the challange thread earlier.

I've run into a bit of a problem. Kelli, my MC, is an alcoholic. She was in her kitchen, making tea, and came across a bottle of Irish Whiskey. It was left over from when her dad was alive. She's tempted to take "just one drink", and I can't decide if I should let her. If she does, it throws almost 6 years of sobriety down the tubes. What to do? :Headbang:
 

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I've run into a bit of a problem. Kelli, my MC, is an alcoholic. She was in her kitchen, making tea, and came across a bottle of Irish Whiskey. It was left over from when her dad was alive. She's tempted to take "just one drink", and I can't decide if I should let her. If she does, it throws almost 6 years of sobriety down the tubes. What to do? :Headbang:

Draw out the tension, perhaps? She decides not to take the drink right now, but she can't bring herself to throw the bottle away (it was her dad's, can't throw a link to him away, etc.). This way she's done the right thing for now, but the temptation will still be gnawing at her.
 

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Draw out the tension, perhaps? She decides not to take the drink right now, but she can't bring herself to throw the bottle away (it was her dad's, can't throw a link to him away, etc.). This way she's done the right thing for now, but the temptation will still be gnawing at her.


Thanks TheIT, that just might work! Hmmm, but would the temptation be to great? It's not easy for an alcoholic. (I was married to one, and believe me, it's not a pretty sight.)
 

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Thanks TheIT, that just might work! Hmmm, but would the temptation be to great? It's not easy for an alcoholic. (I was married to one, and believe me, it's not a pretty sight.)

What else is happening to this character in the story? Remember that writing a story is about sending your characters up a tree then throwing rocks at them. The story comes from how the characters respond.

This is a pretty big rock. Is this a point in the story where this character needs to be strong? If so, maybe she has the willpower to get rid of the bottle. Or is she still trying to decide her course of action? In that case, maybe she hangs onto the bottle. Or has she lost purpose? Then bottom's up!

Use the temptation to intertwine with her actions within the story arc. No matter what she chooses, there will be consequences which might be good or bad for her, but probably great for the story.

ETA: Another thing to consider. What if she's not alone when she finds the bottle? How would another person being there affect her? Would it matter who it was? Would she be more willing to give up temptation if someone else is there, or would she hide the temptation and lie about it?

Brought to you by Questions 'R Us. ;)
 
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Todd: holy crap. Congratulations.

231 for me. I have no idea what it is or where it's going yet; I just sat down and started typing because otherwise I wasn't going to and that seemed something that was way too easy to get stuck in. (The protagonist is apparently someone who's getting exasperated with themselves for only writing doggerel. I make no claims to originality.)

Best, everyone. :)

Love and coffee,
Frances
 

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Yes, congrats Todd on a job well done! So I'm going for it again even though I came up short the last time. Threads like this are good incentive!

Opps, forgot my words. 281.
 

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Not sure of the word count, but about halfway through revising the first chapter/scene. Still not sure whether I want to break the novel into chapters or if I'll leave it broken into scenes.
 

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I'm off my game this month. Only managed 576 today.

I blame it on work, and the fact that I'm going to be another year older this month! :eek:

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Try to get 53 candles on this. (Way over the hill.)
 

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Well you guys are ALL kicking my tail. Thank havens its only the 2nd. On the phone today with someone who has been in scouting for 63 years, so he filled in blanks for me so I added 208 to the article that was technically already done. But its better for it.
 
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587 for me today -- for a blog competition entry, of all things. About savings. Fun times.

Still getting over a sinus thing, so it may take a bit to pick up anything fictional again.
 

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Finally feeling like myself today- thanks for the well wishes- somewhere around 1K yesterday- not sure how much time I'll have today but will try- oh just wanted to give a shout out to heyjude for helping me with my crappy scene!
Have a good day everyone- write on!