You have two spaces after periods. You have mixed em- and en-dashes and hyphens serving as em-dashes, some are open, and some are closed. You have none standard punctuation--it's neither British nor American.
I admit my knowledge of exact style specifications is sometimes rather alarmingly lacking, on the account of me being a clueless foreigner. This just testifies that LaTeX will happily democratise the publication process by allowing us Weirdcountrians to use Automated Data Processing in the Field of Typesetting. Ít ëvèn süppörts Wêîrd äñd Ûnúsùal Åcçénts! A noticeable improvement over the 1980s!
I must, however, emphasise that it will print anything and as such my punctuation is
not LaTeX's fault.
There's no kerning at all, and no ligatures. You've essentially gone with automatic justification, and thus all the rivers.
No ligatures? Look closer. There's "
finest" and "
flash", right on the first page. As far as kerning goes, I blame the font choice. Sometimes, the font choice can mess up ligatures too (I just noted Vera doesn't do "o
fficial" too well in another PDF I have on the site...) Perhaps I should quit messing around with crappy Type-1s and do Computer Modern, like the old man intended. Now
that's ligatures and kerning.
And achtung, where are ze rivers? I printed this out and it was quite easy to read.
There are some admitted problems, though. The formatting is basically based on basic document classes and hence headings and other non-story stuff looks really weird. The metadata isn't well organised because I have little clue about the PDF metadata organisation. The example file doesn't have hyperlinks (to produce a clickable URL in the end of the text) when it probably should. But all of these are fixable.
I'm not saying this to be mean--but to make a point; there is work and art and skill involved in typesetting. It is not for the fainthearted.
And I'm presenting my work as an example of what
I could do. For those who want to blow their minds, there's
the TeX showcase. I'm sorry, I shouldn't have brought such an awful example in. Ignore me, I'm just an Eternal Newbie.