Hello Community,
I'm desperately seeking, would appreciate *any feedback*, good or bad, short or long . . .
Regarding my short script "Educating the Ignorant" (http://www.geocities.com/elmore_brown_co_ltd/educating.txt) of 30 pages with an anti-racism theme as the driving force and plot progression during an unexpected conversation outside of a college university setting between a friendly black guy and some preppy young males.
I am so desperate for advice or feedback because the results and comments I get so far -- yes I know it needs work -- but some people praise it highly while others do the opposite.
I just would like more feedback so I can have a better estimate of what most people think of it. It's amazing how this script carriers different meanings each unique to the reader -- but none of them are consistent enough to benefit me in writing draft #2!
It's just such a mix of feedback that I cannot know if I have a winner or a dumper that needs to be reworked.
You can view it at my website and here is the address:
http://www.geocities.com/elmore_brown_co_ltd
Remember to also send feedback regarding the site design since I did that as well. All feedback on design has been great so far. But seeking more opinions.
Thanks guys,
Respectfully,
Edward Washington (E. Brown)
[email protected]
I'm desperately seeking, would appreciate *any feedback*, good or bad, short or long . . .
Regarding my short script "Educating the Ignorant" (http://www.geocities.com/elmore_brown_co_ltd/educating.txt) of 30 pages with an anti-racism theme as the driving force and plot progression during an unexpected conversation outside of a college university setting between a friendly black guy and some preppy young males.
I am so desperate for advice or feedback because the results and comments I get so far -- yes I know it needs work -- but some people praise it highly while others do the opposite.
I just would like more feedback so I can have a better estimate of what most people think of it. It's amazing how this script carriers different meanings each unique to the reader -- but none of them are consistent enough to benefit me in writing draft #2!
It's just such a mix of feedback that I cannot know if I have a winner or a dumper that needs to be reworked.
You can view it at my website and here is the address:
http://www.geocities.com/elmore_brown_co_ltd
Remember to also send feedback regarding the site design since I did that as well. All feedback on design has been great so far. But seeking more opinions.
Thanks guys,
Respectfully,
Edward Washington (E. Brown)
[email protected]
