The Love Is Over

Try this thread: Music Lab. III won't steer you wrong:

http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=19




Mike

moblues said:

Try this thread: Music Lab. III won't steer you wrong:

http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=19

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Actually the Music Lab says that lyrics without music should be posted in the Poetry Lab (which is, confusingly, called the Poetry Crit forum here).

Well, that's just stupid. When did this happen? I'll work on it for her. I wrote lyrics for nearly thirty years. I just hate long pieces. They tend to be unfocused. Just when I thought I was going to be able to go to bed.

*sigh*




Mike

Welcome to the board invisigirl591. Way too many typos and words that you meant to use but didn't.

On the plus side--I heard the music. You'll be good.


Mike

The Love Is Over

In the beginning
You did everything
and more for me

You made me
experience love
for the first time

Suddenly you changed

You were rude to me
You expected so much out of me
You hurt me

Why'd you change so suddenly?

Can't you think of my feelings too?
The arrogant, rude, disrespectful you It hurts me

[Chorus]
We used to be on the same page
We used to walk the same path
We used to be on the same level
And the 3 words we used to say
All of it is gone now

Seeing this version of you
the other side
It makes me want to forget
forget all the memories of me and you

I makes me realize realize
we weren't made for each other

We fought a lot
I cried so much
I'm sick of all of this

No matter how much
we loved each other

The fire we had has blown away
You only left me with scars
You ripped my heart apart
I'm ashamed to say

you were once mine

[chorus end]

When I wasn't there
You flirted with other girls secretly
You would spend nights with them
Then you'd come back to me
You are such a dirty boy

After we separated
I suspected that you would take some time to get over it
I have not idea why
The next time I saw you
You were already happy with another woman
My love for you had collapsed so much more

Why do I still only want you?
Why do I still think of you?
Why do I sill want to kiss and hold you?
Why am I like this?

Every second it becomes more difficult
My tears are creating a river of sadness
Seeing other couples happily together
I feel extremely lonely

[Chorus]
We used to be on the same page
We used to walk the same path
The 3 words we used to say
I'm trying to forget it all

Seeing this version of you
The other side
It makes me want to forget

forget all the memories
of you and me

It make me realize
realize we were not
destined to be together

We fought so often
I cried all of the time

I'm sick of all of this

No matter how
strong our love was
The fire disappeared

You left me with wounds
You left me with a broken heart
I'm ashamed to say

you were mine
[chorus end]

Your lies are so clear
I can't even count
all the times
I fell for them

You were so deep
inside my heart
You said you wanted
us to be forever

So why are you
saying you want
to leave?

I'm starting to hate you
I'm not thinking
of you anymore

You said not to comeback
I promise you I never will

The old you I had
fallen in love with died

My sad heart and soul
will never be
the same again

I'm tired of this

[Chorus]
We used to be on the same page
We used to be on the same level

3 words we used to say
They are forgotten

Seeing this side of you
The new version
makes me want to forget
forget the memories we had
makes me realize

realize we weren't
made for each other

We fought a lot
I cried too much

I can't take this anymore
No matter how
large out love was

The fire had burned away

You left me scars
You left me
with a damaged heart
I regret you
were once mine
[chorus end]

I regret you were mine
you were mine
I regret it

You hurt me so bad
Why didn't you think of my feelings

The love we had died
The love is over

moblues said:

Well, that's just stupid. When did this happen?

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Apparently, at least as far back as November 2007.

Fudge. I have to fix this.




Mike