July Prompt: The Senses

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Hey there guys! The Mad Monkey, Luekman, chose to foist this month's prompt on me and my big mouth, so this is your punishment for his crimes. :D Feel free to kill Luekman at any time. We'll feed him to Haggis. ;)

This month's prompt is, you guessed it, all about the senses. In stories, we use these senses to connect with our reader, to make them connect with our character(s). We describe.

Not so easy this time.

You have 1500-3000 words.

Your main character(s) MUST try to escape from some preternatural evil. Your character(s) must be human. The evil may be anything; Demons, zombies, werewolves, vampires, monsters, the beast under your bed, in your closet, in your head. (Shout out to Metallica) You may use an animal if you wish, but it HAS to have a supernatural element.

You may only use ONE of the following major senses. Choose wisely, because your character(s) do not have the others. ONE sense to draw us in and make us friggin' believe.

Those senses are:

Sound
Touch
Taste
Smell

Notice that sight is not on that list. That is because you can't have it. No sight, no visuals. No images. The point of this is to make you think about the things we take for granted in our writing, our character's senses. Sight is far too easy, so you can't have that one. I think we'll all benefit from an in depth look at the human senses. You may use any method you wish to explain why the missing senses are missing, if you wish to. BUT, you don't have to explain a thing if you don't want to.

Your chatacter(s) are allowed their "spidey senses", or their intuition in other words, along with one of the four major senses listed.

You have 1500-3000 words. Go!
 

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I'm thinking this should be interesting Effie, everyone working under the same degree of difficulty to produce something hopefully that terrifies. In this case the limitations are the thing that has set my mind racing. Thanks for that. Good luck everyone.
 

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Wow Effie... do we get to use our keyboards with this or are you going to pass out ink and Quills soon too? :D

I think that this is great! Way to step up the stakes... great job! Great idea. I think I might have to think about this for a little while. Hmm...
 

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Ouch. Hard topic, but this should be interesting.

I guess I'll just have to blind someone again... :e2teeth:
 

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BIG whoots. A thousand words so far on this one, and it seems like I'll be doing good to finish in 3K. Whatever. I wouldn't let that stop me. It's a glorious day when one of mine tops 1,500. Anyhow, I'm trying for about the tenth time to redo my first horror story that was lost in a fire. So far, I'm liking this one. As for the prompt, verrrrry tricky. So once the lights go out I focus on hearing and narrow it down from there. I hope that's good enough. But if I love this story in the end it will be fine with me. LOL Oh, and I named my child Effie in thanks for shaking off my block.
 

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There's always room for one more scottishpunk.
 

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I've already got an outline for a Quentin Dallas story.

What happens when a PI gets caught in an explosive spray that involves pepper spray (for the eyes, tongue, and nose), a flashbang (for the eyes), and a neural sedative (for the senses of taste and touch)? He must rely on his sense of hearing to solve the crime.

Hehehe... this is gonna' be challenge...
 

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Okay. I just read it. I will try to freefall this one sometime in the next day or so. It's a really interesting prompt. Excellent. This should be fun.
 

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I;m not sure if this sucks, or if I get to fall back on my love of old time radio broadcasts which were *all* hearing.

Course, with everything else I have going on this month, it may be moot, but an excellent prompt.
 

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GREAT prompt, Effer!

I've got a concept brewing, but have to find time to put fingertips in motion...soon...coming soon...

Again, great prompt.
 

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Had a great time with this prompt! Finally done and posted.

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eta: sorry, I busted the word limit. not my fault, really. the story had a mind of its own.
 
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