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Needing a beta reader for 50k young adult

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tasha43055

tasha43055

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I am in need of a beta reader for my 50k young adult fantasy. The parents of a city have all vanished and the children have to find them. The main character is 16 and she gets her first crush and her first fight. The main thing is telling and showing. I got feedback from an agent that said I have too much telling and not enough showing. Feel free to pm me or drop me an email at [email protected]
 
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