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I'm guessing many here are familiar with the story Sugar Daddy by Lisa Kleypas.
The story begins with the MC as a young girl (15ish) and follows her as she grows into a young woman in her early 20's.
At a very young age, the MC meets a boy who becomes 'the one she really wanted and never quite got over' and this feeling stays with her through the entire book.
My WIP has some similar characteristics: My MC's teenage years are an important part of who she has become and why she made the choices she did. She meets 'the one she really wanted and never quite got over' during her teenage years and the foundation of their relationship was formed during this time.
Later in their lives, they re-connect and their interactions have more to do with the relationship they built many years earlier than the current relationship. (You know they never fell out of love
)
Right now, I have the story starting just before they reconnect and all of the backstory is told in flashbacks.
I hope this makes sense...
My question is:
Would it make more sense to tell this story in a linear format? (From their teen years, glossing through the 15 years they were apart, and picking up again right before they reconnect)
I like the idea of this, but I'm concerned about starting my story with two teenagers and their interactions- that it may confuse the reader who wants to read a love story between two adults.
Any thoughts?
The story begins with the MC as a young girl (15ish) and follows her as she grows into a young woman in her early 20's.
At a very young age, the MC meets a boy who becomes 'the one she really wanted and never quite got over' and this feeling stays with her through the entire book.
My WIP has some similar characteristics: My MC's teenage years are an important part of who she has become and why she made the choices she did. She meets 'the one she really wanted and never quite got over' during her teenage years and the foundation of their relationship was formed during this time.
Later in their lives, they re-connect and their interactions have more to do with the relationship they built many years earlier than the current relationship. (You know they never fell out of love
Right now, I have the story starting just before they reconnect and all of the backstory is told in flashbacks.
I hope this makes sense...
My question is:
Would it make more sense to tell this story in a linear format? (From their teen years, glossing through the 15 years they were apart, and picking up again right before they reconnect)
I like the idea of this, but I'm concerned about starting my story with two teenagers and their interactions- that it may confuse the reader who wants to read a love story between two adults.
Any thoughts?
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