I'm the grammar Nazi in my critique group, but I have weak areas and this is one of them:
The critique group meets tonight, BTW.
Maryn, thanking respondants in advance because she has lovely manners at times
Okay, I want to put an apostrophe after the s in years--but it is actually a possessive? (Or am I just wacked out and sleep-deprived, as I've suspected since this morning, when coffee wasn't getting the job done?)He had many more years experience than his son, so...
The critique group meets tonight, BTW.
Maryn, thanking respondants in advance because she has lovely manners at times