critisize me please

cornell · Jun 14, 2008

hey all. I haven't written in ears as I emigrated to the US and had to do manual work to get on my feet. Now I want to start again. Heres my blog with a few examples. Article 1 and 3 are new. Chemical Warfare I wrote in 98. Any advice for me based on these articles?#1 is the only one unpublished

Birol · Jun 14, 2008

Hello and welcome to AW.

First, we need the link to your blog. Second, if it is on your blog, it is published now.

cornell · Jun 14, 2008

oops!! http://baggblog.blogspot.com/

Matera the Mad · Jun 14, 2008

Oh, nice blog.

You can spell, eh?

Juuuuust kiddin'

Hang around, you're in the write place.

The humor gets lumpy, but the popcorn is good.

HorsebackWriter · Jun 14, 2008

Welcome to AW! : )

Em

CACTUSWENDY · Jun 15, 2008

Welcome to AW. Hope you enjoy your stay with us.

How do you like your popcorn?

Nickie · Jun 15, 2008

Hello to you, and welcome to AW.

Nickie

Write4U2 · Jun 15, 2008

Criticize you? Ok...your handwriting is awful, you eat the popcorn with too much salt, and your cup is chipped.

OK?

Welcome!

c2ckim · Jun 15, 2008

Welcome. This place is awesome. I've learned loads just by reading what other writers and writers wannabe contribute.

auntybug · Jun 16, 2008

critisize me please

You're ugly and your mother dresses you funny.

Chrisla · Jun 17, 2008

Write4U2 said:
Criticize you? Ok...your handwriting is awful, you eat the popcorn with too much salt, and your cup is chipped.

OK?

Welcome!

And you forgot to wipe your feet when you came in the door!

Welcome, anyway.

Matera the Mad · Jun 17, 2008

Hey, those are your own footprints, Chrisla. It wasn't raining that day

MsK · Jun 17, 2008

First, let me criticize you... your avatar is invisible.
Now, welcome to AW. Have fun.

Chrisla · Jun 17, 2008

Matera the Mad said:
Hey, those are your own footprints, Chrisla. It wasn't raining that day

Ah, but how about sticky, bloody footprints leading back to the crime scene? Leaves little for the PI to do. . .

Matera the Mad · Jun 17, 2008

Aha, but why do you think the avatar is invisible?

Chrisla · Jun 17, 2008

Matera the Mad said:
Aha, but why do you think the avatar is invisible?

An invisible man (Mad, of course) left bloody footsteps across the white shag carpet?

critisize me please

cornell

Birol

Around and About

cornell

Matera the Mad

Bartender, gimme a Linux Mint

HorsebackWriter

Dream at a gallop!

CACTUSWENDY

An old, sappy, and happy one.

Nickie

Not too old to learn

Write4U2

c2ckim

auntybug

teh other evil broad

Chrisla

practical experience, FTW

Matera the Mad

Bartender, gimme a Linux Mint

MsK

Chrisla

practical experience, FTW

Matera the Mad

Bartender, gimme a Linux Mint

Chrisla

practical experience, FTW