Phone conversations in a script. For whatever reason I don't know to write one without it feeling awkward.
I'm dealing with a quick phone conversation in the middle of a lunch scene right now. I'm basically writing one side of the conversation. This is one of those short little "hey, sorry, I'm eating lunch; I'll be there shortly; don't forget my golf clubs" sort of conversations if that helps provide a frame of reference. For whatever reason, I really want to put little parentheticals where a pause would go. Are my instincts right or am I just suffering from a newly-surfacing mental illness?
Along these same lines, I feel the same way with "bigger" phone conversations. Having a longer phone conversation feels cumbersome to me when I write one. Should a writer just lay the dialog out there and leave the powers-that-be to film longer phone conversations however they desire?
I'm usually pretty good about just writing the script and leaving the directing/casting/etc to do their jobs, but I get all weird and controlly about this one issue.
Hopefully these questions make sense. Hopefully people don't gawk at me for my total lack of knowledge (and pants). Thanks in advance for your help!
I'm dealing with a quick phone conversation in the middle of a lunch scene right now. I'm basically writing one side of the conversation. This is one of those short little "hey, sorry, I'm eating lunch; I'll be there shortly; don't forget my golf clubs" sort of conversations if that helps provide a frame of reference. For whatever reason, I really want to put little parentheticals where a pause would go. Are my instincts right or am I just suffering from a newly-surfacing mental illness?
Along these same lines, I feel the same way with "bigger" phone conversations. Having a longer phone conversation feels cumbersome to me when I write one. Should a writer just lay the dialog out there and leave the powers-that-be to film longer phone conversations however they desire?
I'm usually pretty good about just writing the script and leaving the directing/casting/etc to do their jobs, but I get all weird and controlly about this one issue.
Hopefully these questions make sense. Hopefully people don't gawk at me for my total lack of knowledge (and pants). Thanks in advance for your help!