do you think the mid way division caused problems? it was sort of very crammed with the rory/amy/river song stuff squeezed around an astronaut and a death, followed by a girl who keeps dying as he tries to work out why. maybe a bit too much...
I just don't know why they didn't have a few more deaths to really build it up, and maybe more of the visits he was doing to work it out, like with the mystic. he didn't even go to see who the girl in the darlek asylum was BEFORE she was changed, surely first place to look for answers?
add to that the stories were all crammed together and had a lot going on, it was an opportunity missed. also, and I liked it the first time around, I didn't like the intrusion in older footage as it just felt a bit strange thinking about it! could have just been the 11th doctors timeline and I would have accepted that...
I think making sense is vital as too many contradictions and half facts presented. "I can't go here", oh no yes I can. "I can't enter here", oh no yes I can, "I can't rewrite this point", oh wait yes I can. just give some boundaries and let people die