When your MC is engaged in questionable behavior

Triplec224

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I've been working on a MG/YA novel where the main character and his sister are homeless. The MC is a teenager in the 16-18 range, and his sister is much younger, say 7 or so. The MC provides for the two of them from winnings earned from 1-on-1 street basketball games, sometimes a couple hundred dollars at a time.

The novel isn't entirely about basketball, but it's definitely a recurring event. Would portraying a main character who gambles (and wins) be frowned upon by parents of readers? The gambling eventually comes back to hurt the MC indirectly, so it's not entirely glamorizing, but the kid does put money down on games and usually wins.

More generally, is it best to avoid behaviors like this for characters in novels for this age group? Things like smoking, underage drinking, drugs, etc?
 

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If your MC is in the 16-18 age range then I would say that places your novel quite firmly in the YA bracket, in which case none of the things you mention will be a problem. YA often deals with difficult subjects. I hope that helps.
 

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Yes, this sounds more like YA to me, both the content and the age of the MC.
 

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Yes, it sounds YA, and just to offer a comparable title you might like to check out, Don't Breathe a Word by Holly Cupala is a really good YA contemporary about homeless teens. Plenty of "questionable" but necessary behavior there.
 

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As a parent, I find the idea of *objecting* to your protags trying to survive by betting on basketball kind of absurd. I might object to a society which allows kids to be homeless, but that ain't your novel's fault.
 

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Like kids who are hungry stealing food. Right or wrong?
 

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Did you know that in the Winnie the Pooh books, characters lie all the time, steal things and even participate in a kidnapping? LOL! You can make your characters do 'bad' things but write it in such a way that it's not even noticeable or objectionable.

However this is a moot point because I'm going to echo everyone else and say that your book is definitely YA.
 

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Little e-- just because it happens doesn't nessesarily mean that society "allows" it to happen. Kids are homeless without people even realizing it all the time.
 

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It would bother me if he actually won all the time, but only because no one wins all the time. Besides, when he loses, the consequences are real and the next game becomes even more important. Just a thought.