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Oh cool there is some of that in my WIP and I hoped it wasn't outdated.I'm with you on this one - that's my favorite!
Oh cool there is some of that in my WIP and I hoped it wasn't outdated.I'm with you on this one - that's my favorite!
Maybe that's because I like "big secret" plots. As long as it's a good secret (like "I'm actually a girl.") and there's a good reason to keep it. Then there's suspense as we wait for the moment the big secret comes out and how it will affect their relationship. It had better have a big effect though. If I've been biting my nails for 200 pages wondering what the fallout is going to be, there'd better be something more than "it doesn't matter." It doesn't have to be super dramatic "we're breaking up I never want to see you again" type of fallout, but it should have some effect.![]()
I like the "Scarlett Pimpernell" type of trope, where the hero is pretending to be an incompetant bumbling fop, but he's really ALPHA MAN! And they're thrown together somewhat.
Bonus points if ALPHA MAN! Is a pirate whose seducing her too and has ANGSTY PANTS because she thinks FOP BOY is nice and he gets jealous of himself!!!!
