I have a strange situation, perhaps a bit naive. No specific question, but just seeking comments from YAers, since I don't have any experience in that area.
I have recently begun a story that is Science Fiction, set in the future. The beginning is sort of YA - a conversation between a teenage girl and her mother about a new video game, which is integral to the plot.
I want to make the conversation realistic, so I wrote the dialog like I think I would have spoken as a teenager (somewhat).
The girl and her mom might make another appearance once or twice more in the story, but I don't envision her as an important character. In fact, part of their participation is to "show" important facts to the reader instead of Info Dumping.
Any advice on this vague situation?
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I have recently begun a story that is Science Fiction, set in the future. The beginning is sort of YA - a conversation between a teenage girl and her mother about a new video game, which is integral to the plot.
I want to make the conversation realistic, so I wrote the dialog like I think I would have spoken as a teenager (somewhat).
The girl and her mom might make another appearance once or twice more in the story, but I don't envision her as an important character. In fact, part of their participation is to "show" important facts to the reader instead of Info Dumping.
Any advice on this vague situation?
ADVICE RECEIVED BELOW - NO FURTHER COMMENTS NECESSARY (I REWROTE THAT SPECIFIC SECTION)
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