I read this thread and am still laughing. If an agent can't use proper grammar, syntax, spelling et., then keep away. Still, I'm glad it was here to keep us from being duped.
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An unthinkable act has occurred in an upscale suburban area in Fort Lauderdale, Florida.A six month old girl was murder. During the investigation, Shelia discover another murder, conspiracy to murder and stolen identities. To save her client, she will have to move fast against the power of the court. Shelia, and her friends racing against time will leave no stone unturned to find the murder of six month old Lisa. As the investigation proceed Shelia will discover a secret that will shock the state.
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The problem with the manuscripts coining in are formatting, grammar. and pronunciations . Another problem is communication between the characters. An agent usually know if they can market a project
within ten pages of the manuscript, so we are here to help you get your project to the publishers
Check out some of the writers workshops that covers this subject, and commas. I hope this help you, and thanks for checking out our blog.
A well develop character is the start of a great story.
Literally vs. Figuratively, this caught my attention so I decided to speak on it. There is a big contemporary argument as to whether or not you can use literally as a hyperbole. The stickers for grammar who don't believe in using literally when you mean figuratively will call you out on grammatical misstep. Literally is in a sense exact , so if you say something literally happen, you mean it actually happen.
A lot of members have completed their projects.
They are ready to get on the road of getting publish, but do they know what it takes to get publish.
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New Book For 2011 (this was posted in July 2012!) The Black Throne II Series
We are proud to announce that we will be posting new books that are coming out through our agency. The Black Throne II Series will be out at the end of this year in Oct 12, 2012. I look forward to getting my copy. I look forward to announcing our books for 2012.
2012 NEW BOOK MINUTES TO DEATH
This is a great hard ball mystery with a wild twist for detective Lance Darn who has to find a serial killer, and save his best friend who has minutes to death. Look for this hard ball mystery in 2013
by Lesile Bells published by Clarion Books Inc.
OUR TWO RECENT BOOKS COMING SOON
Murray's Literary Agency is proud to announce the two recent books that are due to come out soon, we all are waiting patiently for- When The Clock Hit 12, I'll Be Back written by Sonja James. This is a thriller that will keep you turning the pages to see what is going to happen next. The second book Pray For David. This is a hard ball mystery that is funny, and gut retching that will keep you shouting for the hero. I will keep everyone informed as to when the books will be out.
NEW BOOK THE SPY OF DAVID COMING SOON
The Spy of David written by Elliot Goldenberg. The Untold Story of the Pollard case is a great spy story based on true events. Spy lovers, you are going to love this story, it's being published by Strategic Media Books
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For Authors, Journalists and Writers
Send us a cover letter outlining the story or theme of your book, how long it will take to complete it, a brief bio, one or two chapters, and the marketing plan you have in place to sell it. If we are interested, we will contact you, asking for a full copy of the manuscript.
http://strategicmediabooks.com/for-authors-journalists-and-writers/
Despite the name similarity, there doesn't seem to be any connection.Strategic Media Books isn't another of Robert Fletcher's companies, is it?
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Murray's Literary Agency handle fiction, non fiction, romance, mysteries, suspense, thrillers and other genres.
We are a small agent of two but we handle a large scale of writers. I started writing in 1991, then my book was published, and I began working as a agent to help other writers get publish. I am also a Mary Kay Independent Beauty Consultant www.marykay.com/emurray22
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Murray's Literary Agency
Murray's Literary Agent started in 1998 handling all genre, and now we handle fiction, non fiction, romance, thrillers, mysteries, suspense, and sci fy and chrildren books. We have helped hundereds of new writers get published, and we can help you.
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UPDATE FOR 2014 ON NEW EDITORIAL SERVICES
Murray's Literary Agency will be offering a editorial service in 2014, we made this decision based on hundreds of manuscripts that we received that are not ready to be sent to an agent. An Agent usually do not help in the revision of a manuscript, therefore turning down a lot of manuscript for one reason or another. A manuscript sent to an agent should be ready to go to a publishers desk
without any last minute revisions. In the past years, we have assisted many writers with the common issues of formatting, grammar, pronunciation, and more. I will continue to market
the clients work that we have listed, but we will not be accepting any new submissions until
June 2014, however, I will be accepting writers that do need help with writing their first novel, or need help in revising their novels. I will keep you updated as we move closer to the new year of 2014, Any questions contact me at [email protected]
http://murrayliteraryservice.blogspot.co.uk/2013/11/update-for-2014-on-new-editorial.html
About this community
As a former agent, and creator of South Florida Writers and Other, I have moved forward to the editorial department. The decision came to me because of having to decline so many manuscripts that I received. . I want every writer to succeed in writing a great story. This group is designed to help writers or anyone that believes that they have a writer within themselves, have a great story to tell, or for anyone who want to write successfully. The group will also hold local meeting to discuss what agents, and publishers are look for in this industry. Join us on this journey.
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The way we offer help to writers are through agents representation, and editorial services.
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The Jockey Ridge Murder
Unidentifiable.
For Sale In Palm Spring
This should be For Sale in Palm Springs by Albert Simon and appears to be self-published.
The Spy of David
We've already dealt with this one.
United
Unidentifiable.
A Rose By Any Other Name
There are several books with this title - which one is Murray referring to?
Agents War
Unidentifiable.
Life, Pardon The Inconvenience
Unidentifiable.
Motherhood, A Family Memoir
Jon David K's book was self-published through Fastpencil.inc
Coyote Vision
Could this be Brad Whitewolf's Coyote Visions? If so it was self-published through Dog Ear Publishing.
The Runner
Unidentifiable. I doubt if it's the 61-page story by W J Davies.
The Stran Curse
This has to be The Strans Curse by Bryon C Decker.
Dear Mr. Killer
Another novel by Bryon C Decker. Like The Strans Curse it was self-published through CreateSpace.
No disrespect to Mr Decker, but this is an example of what passed under Murray's keen editorial eye:
It is amazing on how some people go through life and never worry about a natural disaster striking their homes. If the child they raised is going to die in the line of duty because they signed up in the military. They go on their daily lives not worrying the neighbor might end up dead. This is where I come in; I enjoy taking these little boring towns and give them a spot on national TV.
Oddly enough, both of Mr Decker's books have a very brief review by 'Patricia', who writes exactly like Eunice Murray.
The Kukoo Virus
Unidentifiable.
Screenplays
Star Trek Geramino
MURRAY'S LITERARY AGENCY SOLD A STAR TREK SCREENPLAY?!!!!
Moving Forward
Charlie
There's no way I can verify the other two.
Comic
Maggie The Prostitute
Unidentifiable.
http://murrayliteraryservice.blogspot.co.uk/p/book-listing.html
Maybe she couldn't work with someone who didn't share her abhorrence of the letter 's'??
This club is for anyone who has a writer within you, have a great story to tell, or anyone who want to write successful. The club will hold local meeting to discuss what agents, and publishers are looking for.
http://murrayliteraryservice.blogspot.co.uk/p/riting.html
Children Books
Watch Me Draw
There's a whole series of Watch Me Draw books but I couldn't find an individual book with this title.
The Money Tree
I could find no likely candidates.
Angus The Wonder Horse
Unidentifiable.
Brielle Elaine Tries To Fit In
Brielle-Elaine Tries to Fit In! by La-Toya S Facey was vanity-published by AuthorHouse.
Education
The Personal Bailout Handbook
Unidentifiable.
http://murrayliteraryservice.blogspot.co.uk/p/book-listing.html