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Old 05-15-2012, 05:42 AM   #8226
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Cling to memories—
hollow shells caught in my web.
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Old 05-15-2012, 07:39 AM   #8227
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Old 05-15-2012, 10:58 PM   #8228
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Old 05-16-2012, 01:05 AM   #8229
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Old 05-17-2012, 06:09 PM   #8230
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Causing you to swear
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Old 05-19-2012, 05:14 AM   #8231
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A poisoned apple,
Stealthy footfalls in the night.
Regret, writ in blood.
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Old 05-20-2012, 12:23 AM   #8232
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Regret, writ in blood,
Swift death, wrote on surprised face,
The war, etched in time.
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Old 05-20-2012, 08:08 AM   #8233
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The war, etched in time,
like scratches made in granite,
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Old 05-20-2012, 04:03 PM   #8234
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Outlasts truth and lie,
the simple statement of love
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Old 05-20-2012, 07:45 PM   #8235
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In your brilliant eyes,
My love, I'm transformed into
Something far greater
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Old 05-22-2012, 05:54 AM   #8236
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something far greater
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Old 05-22-2012, 08:45 AM   #8237
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talents, God given -
multiplied, enrich our lives;
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Old 05-24-2012, 06:24 PM   #8239
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Who cannot hate you
With all your selfish lies and
Cowardly secrets?
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Old 05-24-2012, 07:12 PM   #8240
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Cowardly secrets
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Old 05-25-2012, 05:40 PM   #8241
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The truth will free you
But first it will piss you off
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Old 05-25-2012, 09:41 PM   #8242
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glad that's just a phase,
childhood turns to somber thoughts;
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Old 05-25-2012, 10:25 PM   #8243
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Old 05-26-2012, 12:29 AM   #8244
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Smoke, past the bodies
Writhing in the dim-lit room
Lipstick on my cheek
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Old 05-26-2012, 07:14 AM   #8245
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Old 05-28-2012, 04:56 AM   #8246
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Old 05-28-2012, 07:35 AM   #8247
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Old 06-02-2012, 06:17 PM   #8248
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Old 06-04-2012, 11:21 PM   #8249
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