Chain, chain, chain, chain of haiku fools - Page 325

diamond egis · 03-26-2012, 09:24 AM

after the wave hit

roving air in light
of wet moon water and ice
whalers nerve edges

diamond egis · 03-27-2012, 12:16 AM

whalers nerve edges

bone to bitten fence
the wind clenches its abode
have at thee, sailor

find the tapestry

B.D. Eyeslie · 03-27-2012, 05:44 AM

Diamond,
You have five verses here; what you should have is three. You're actually supposed to take the last line of the previous post and make that your first line. The next poster uses your last line, and so forth--the never-ending Haiku serpentines its way through peoples personal obsessions, one 5-7-5 Haiku at a time. Sort of like Sudoku for poets. That said:

Have at thee, sailor,
for I'm just a little fish.
Catch me if you can.

zanzjan · 03-27-2012, 05:49 AM

Catch me if you can!
I throw words to trip you up:
Zygote. Purple. Squee!

Debio · 03-27-2012, 06:18 AM

Zygote. Purple. Squee.
Perfidious. Biquintile.
These are fun to say.

cray · 03-27-2012, 10:19 PM

these are fun to say
april first is just one day.
i may take a nap.

Debio · 03-28-2012, 03:00 AM

I may take a nap
I got thirty minutes till work
grab it when you can

Paul · 03-28-2012, 03:15 AM

grab it when you can
with both hands, clasping, grasping
dont let go, ever!

Blarg · 03-28-2012, 03:53 AM

Don't let go, ever!
One day that big brass ring will
pull you off the horse.

Perscribo · 03-28-2012, 04:00 AM

Pull you off the horse?
We should have called you an ass.
Clearly you can't ride.

B.D. Eyeslie · 03-28-2012, 05:43 AM

Clearly you can't ride
a butterfly sans bridle;
you'll pull off his wings.

Debio · 03-28-2012, 05:48 AM

you'll pull off his wings
if you keep on doing that
let the poor thing go

kdnxdr · 03-28-2012, 06:57 AM

let the poor thing go,
an unfortunate demise;
one percent plays god

Blarg · 03-28-2012, 11:46 AM

One percent plays god
99 nods and listens
wishing they were them.

Debio · 03-28-2012, 12:24 PM

wishing they were them
that little shade of meaning
between "S" and "M"

kdnxdr · 03-28-2012, 05:50 PM

between "S" and "M"
there is no love lost, none gained;
only darkness - pain

B.D. Eyeslie · 03-28-2012, 09:29 PM

Only darkness—pain—
a forgiving heart tends to bleed.
Yours is much the same.

Paul · 03-29-2012, 02:34 AM

Yours is much the same
as mine, or hers, or theirs. Stairs
too steep too ignore

Perscribo · 03-29-2012, 07:56 AM

Too steep? To ignore
this mountain's treacherous face,
concede to the fall.

Debio · 03-29-2012, 01:52 PM

concede to the Fall
'cause school will start tomorrow
vacation over

B.D. Eyeslie · 03-30-2012, 05:30 PM

Vacation over,
the bears return to the park,
rested from their nap.

kdnxdr · 03-30-2012, 08:53 PM

rested from their nap,
the citizenry awoke;
where did freedom go?

Debio · 03-31-2012, 10:18 AM

Where did freedom go?
If you ask that, it's too late.
We warned you before.

B.D. Eyeslie · 03-31-2012, 05:34 PM

We warned you before:
the ice you tread on is thin.
Go softly to shore.

Blarg · 03-31-2012, 10:58 PM

Go softly to shore
the great wide swim is over --
take your place in sand.

03-26-2012, 09:24 AM	#8101
diamond egis interring peace Join Date: Mar 2012 Posts: 21	after the wave hit roving air in light of wet moon water and ice whalers nerve edges __________________ yes

03-27-2012, 12:16 AM	#8102
diamond egis interring peace Join Date: Mar 2012 Posts: 21	whalers nerve edges bone to bitten fence the wind clenches its abode have at thee, sailor find the tapestry __________________ yes

03-27-2012, 05:49 AM	#8104
zanzjan Do not taunt Happy Fun Mod AW Moderator Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: the everlasting universe of things Posts: 3,607	Catch me if you can! I throw words to trip you up: Zygote. Purple. Squee! __________________ zanzjan.net - twitter - facebook "It's always wrong of course to say that you can't do this or you can't do that in fiction. You can do anything you can get away with, but nobody has ever gotten away with much." -- Flannery O'Connor

03-28-2012, 04:00 AM	#8110
Perscribo sand piper Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: California Posts: 625	Pull you off the horse? We should have called you an ass. Clearly you can't ride. __________________ __________________ Jen __________________ Classic ePoetry for your Kindle

03-28-2012, 06:57 AM	#8113
kdnxdr One of the most important people in the world Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: near to Dogwood Missouri Posts: 7,718	let the poor thing go, an unfortunate demise; one percent plays god __________________ check out my flickr photos : http://www.flickr.com/photos/kdnxdr/ Here is our new website for culinary classes and tours: http://www.rolandparny.com Blog: Food For Thought http://www.rolandparny.com/food-for-thought.html

03-27-2012, 05:44 AM	#8103
B.D. Eyeslie practical experience, FTW Join Date: May 2011 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 791	Diamond, You have five verses here; what you should have is three. You're actually supposed to take the last line of the previous post and make that your first line. The next poster uses your last line, and so forth--the never-ending Haiku serpentines its way through peoples personal obsessions, one 5-7-5 Haiku at a time. Sort of like Sudoku for poets. That said: Have at thee, sailor, for I'm just a little fish. Catch me if you can.

03-27-2012, 06:18 AM	#8105
Debio I got Kraken Treats, $1.50 a bag. Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Japan Posts: 1,149	Zygote. Purple. Squee. Perfidious. Biquintile. These are fun to say.

03-27-2012, 10:19 PM	#8106
cray thread stalker AW Moderator Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Post #37264 Posts: 27,092	these are fun to say april first is just one day. i may take a nap.

03-28-2012, 03:00 AM	#8107
Debio I got Kraken Treats, $1.50 a bag. Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Japan Posts: 1,149	I may take a nap I got thirty minutes till work grab it when you can

03-28-2012, 03:15 AM	#8108
Paul Banned for Trolling Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Close to mother Sea Posts: 4,508	grab it when you can with both hands, clasping, grasping dont let go, ever!

03-28-2012, 03:53 AM	#8109
Blarg Banned Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: 13th of never Posts: 2,497	Don't let go, ever! One day that big brass ring will pull you off the horse.

03-28-2012, 05:43 AM	#8111
B.D. Eyeslie practical experience, FTW Join Date: May 2011 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 791	Clearly you can't ride a butterfly sans bridle; you'll pull off his wings.

03-28-2012, 05:48 AM	#8112
Debio I got Kraken Treats, $1.50 a bag. Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Japan Posts: 1,149	you'll pull off his wings if you keep on doing that let the poor thing go

03-28-2012, 11:46 AM	#8114
Blarg Banned Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: 13th of never Posts: 2,497	One percent plays god 99 nods and listens wishing they were them.

03-28-2012, 12:24 PM	#8115
Debio I got Kraken Treats, $1.50 a bag. Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Japan Posts: 1,149	wishing they were them that little shade of meaning between "S" and "M"

03-28-2012, 05:50 PM	#8116
kdnxdr One of the most important people in the world Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: near to Dogwood Missouri Posts: 7,718	between "S" and "M" there is no love lost, none gained; only darkness - pain __________________ check out my flickr photos : http://www.flickr.com/photos/kdnxdr/ Here is our new website for culinary classes and tours: http://www.rolandparny.com Blog: Food For Thought http://www.rolandparny.com/food-for-thought.html

03-28-2012, 09:29 PM	#8117
B.D. Eyeslie practical experience, FTW Join Date: May 2011 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 791	Only darkness—pain— a forgiving heart tends to bleed. Yours is much the same. Last edited by B.D. Eyeslie; 03-28-2012 at 09:34 PM.

03-29-2012, 02:34 AM	#8118
Paul Banned for Trolling Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Close to mother Sea Posts: 4,508	Yours is much the same as mine, or hers, or theirs. Stairs too steep too ignore

03-29-2012, 07:56 AM	#8119
Perscribo sand piper Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: California Posts: 625	Too steep? To ignore this mountain's treacherous face, concede to the fall. __________________ __________________ Jen __________________ Classic ePoetry for your Kindle

03-29-2012, 01:52 PM	#8120
Debio I got Kraken Treats, $1.50 a bag. Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Japan Posts: 1,149	concede to the Fall 'cause school will start tomorrow vacation over

03-30-2012, 05:30 PM	#8121
B.D. Eyeslie practical experience, FTW Join Date: May 2011 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 791	Vacation over, the bears return to the park, rested from their nap.

03-30-2012, 08:53 PM	#8122
kdnxdr One of the most important people in the world Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: near to Dogwood Missouri Posts: 7,718	rested from their nap, the citizenry awoke; where did freedom go? __________________ check out my flickr photos : http://www.flickr.com/photos/kdnxdr/ Here is our new website for culinary classes and tours: http://www.rolandparny.com Blog: Food For Thought http://www.rolandparny.com/food-for-thought.html

03-31-2012, 10:18 AM	#8123
Debio I got Kraken Treats, $1.50 a bag. Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Japan Posts: 1,149	Where did freedom go? If you ask that, it's too late. We warned you before.

03-31-2012, 05:34 PM	#8124
B.D. Eyeslie practical experience, FTW Join Date: May 2011 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 791	We warned you before: the ice you tread on is thin. Go softly to shore.

03-31-2012, 10:58 PM	#8125
Blarg Banned Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: 13th of never Posts: 2,497	Go softly to shore the great wide swim is over -- take your place in sand.

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