A pleasure to have you join us. In my limited experience, the best results at Share Your Work (SYW) often come after you've been around a bit, offered feedback, discussed your genre on its board, etc. Not that newbies who ask for critique don't get any, but people are more willing to give their time to somebody they know a bit and like well enough.
Which I'm sure we'll do, once we know you better.
Maryn, glad to meet you