Teens Writing For Teens (v2)

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KarlaErikaCal

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Haha thanks Elu!

I am jumping the gun though. I still need to finish 1 last blurb :tongue I have the premise in my head. Just gotta write it down :D
 

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AH!! Did not realize you can import your blog to Facebook Notes!!

*cringes*

I've been copying/pasting for the past 3 weeks! :(
 

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I got my first SNI in a long time yesterday. :tongue Have to see if it sticks around long enough to be written.

But for now I'm off to bed! Night, twifties!
 

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Okay, so, since I took a nap today and my sleeping schedule is messed up, I'm pulling an all-nighter. I have to get up at 3 anyway, so it's not even like it matters.

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Her bare legs scraped against the thick bristle of the growth, but the grating on her legs and the blood dripping from her small wounds was not enough to distract her.

Is that third-person limited?
Also, is it telling or showing?
 

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That alone is 3rd limited because you're just following the girl's POV. I think it's showing. If you say.. She hurt herself on the thick bristle of the growth ... that is telling.
 

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Oh okay, I think that makes sense.

xD

Snap, my sister is home. Guess I'll see you guys later. Again. Blah.

Lol.

Bye!
 

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Jade you still there? I keep wondering where you live :tongue

Because I think you are 14 hours ahead? Or am I technically 10 hours ahead.. :tongue
 

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It's 12:38 a.m. here

ETA: Wowowow, I forgot that it's a 24 hour day.. I was thinking in terms of 12 *facepalm*

It's late lol
 

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Haha, it's okay. Oh, and technically I am 10 hours ahead :D

I know Leasie is 13 hours ahead (technically 11 hours behind).

*is still giddy that she wrote all her blurbs!!*

I am not tired at all yet. I had rootbeer earlier. Although my eyes are starting to feel heavy. Sleep will overcome me in the next half hour for sure lol

MH, your avvie scares me lol. I try to look away, but it's so scary I am fixated on it. If that makes any sense. Once again, it is late. :tongue
 

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Mini Teaser: "Our new couple nickname will be TnT. 'Cause you and me together are dynamite; we're smoking hot. You and me. TnT." - says a character in one of my new ideas!
 

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Zzz. Still waking up after a marathon 4am writing sesson. Knocked out over 4k last night and I'm at 65k total for November.
 
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