First Reader for YA Novel

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LizPage

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Hi all,

I've finished up and edited my 65,000 word YA novel and have had 4 fulls requested out of my first twenty or so queries (this is finally! the book). My dream agent called to say she's interested but would like to see some structural revisions and suggested I get a first reader because with the intensity of the plot I've lost sight of some tension building. So, if you're interested I can actually send you my synopsis from my query and I'd gladly return the favor.

Thanks so much!
Liz
 

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Hello,

I would be willing to take a look at it for you, just PM me with the synopsis and I will e-mail you my e-mail addy.
 

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Hi,

I'm still learning, but I'm an avid reader. I would be happy to let you know my thoughts. Feel free to PM me and I'll get right back to you.
 

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You could send it to me. I am a professional feature writer BTW, so may not be that great with helping you with fiction. But I could be some help.
 
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