I want a new Poem Contest - Page 2

Feiss · 03-18-2009, 04:44 AM

The boy stood on the burning deck
and held out his blue ink bic
shouted at the internet quick
who the hell won this contest, ick!

Duke · 03-20-2009, 05:22 AM

The boy stood on the burning deck,
Frantic about his charred dollar.
He quickly got embroiled as heck
And hotter under the collar.

Duke · 03-20-2009, 07:10 AM

The boy stood on the burning deck,
Wildly compelled to run and hide.
Tonight's meal is a flagrant wreck.
The barbeque fell on its side.

Herman Munster · 05-01-2009, 02:34 AM

The boy stood on the burning deck
His hair waved in the breeze
His HEAD bobbled about and nearly fell off
As the fire forced him to his knees!

I haven't been here for some time.
I must confess to great joy as I read so many excellent and original works. The response has been most heartening, and I truly trust that so many people have enjoyed themselves as they have passed thru here. Clearly, this has to be one of the greatest creative successes I have ever had and even if I remain unpublished, I feel SWEET success right here and now!

Herman Munster · 11-02-2009, 05:44 PM

The boy stood on the burning deck,
He dug deep into his pockets and fetched a dollar,
The flames they roared around and above his neck,
But sadly, all they did was incinerated the cash and boy didn't he HOLLAR!

Herman Munster · 11-02-2009, 05:46 PM

The boy stood on the burning deck,
He dug deep into his pockets and fetched a dollar,
The flames they roared around and above his neck,
All they did was incinerated the cash and boy didn't he HOLLAR!

Herman Munster · 11-02-2009, 05:48 PM

I said to myself the boy was on the burning deck
This place is so much hotter and bleak
There are people here and there and here some more
But all the cash I managed to raise could get him a 2bit whore

Herman Munster · 11-02-2009, 05:49 PM

The boy stood on the burning deck
His life was clearly little more than a speck
It is resurrected, is this a good or bad deed
We will have to wait and watch the seed!

Blarg · 11-03-2009, 02:18 AM

The boy stood on the burning deck,
thinking honor comes and goes,
but as he owned just that one neck,
he'd best strap into women's clothes.

*NeW*WrItEr* · 11-03-2009, 02:29 AM

The boy stood on the burning deck
While crying his eyes out
Thinking of how the world is a wreck
It cannot be saved, this he knows without a doubt

Colin Fiat · 11-03-2009, 07:15 AM

The boy stood on the burning deck
Of starship enterprise
A Klingon dagger in the neck
Of Romulan disguised

joemclaughlin4 · 11-03-2009, 08:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BCarruth

The boy stood on the burning deck,
his shipmates laid in rows
pray'd the sea'd embrace the wreck,
his sins swallowed, unknown.

I really like that one.

Lavern08 · 11-04-2009, 01:03 AM

The boy stood on the burning deck
Observing the mess he'd made
The turkey was fried
But so was his hide
At least his insurance was paid.

03-20-2009, 05:22 AM	#27
Duke Versifier nolo contendere Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Santa Fe Trail Posts: 30	The boy stood on the burning deck, Frantic about his charred dollar. He quickly got embroiled as heck And hotter under the collar. __________________ "Physically conservative and socially literal."

03-20-2009, 07:10 AM	#28
Duke Versifier nolo contendere Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Santa Fe Trail Posts: 30	The boy stood on the burning deck, Wildly compelled to run and hide. Tonight's meal is a flagrant wreck. The barbeque fell on its side. __________________ "Physically conservative and socially literal."

05-01-2009, 02:34 AM	#29
Herman Munster AW Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: In a house in NZ. Posts: 111	Pome or other! The boy stood on the burning deck His hair waved in the breeze His HEAD bobbled about and nearly fell off As the fire forced him to his knees! I haven't been here for some time. I must confess to great joy as I read so many excellent and original works. The response has been most heartening, and I truly trust that so many people have enjoyed themselves as they have passed thru here. Clearly, this has to be one of the greatest creative successes I have ever had and even if I remain unpublished, I feel SWEET success right here and now!

11-02-2009, 05:44 PM	#30
Herman Munster AW Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: In a house in NZ. Posts: 111	Dead, deed or ned or need? The boy stood on the burning deck, He dug deep into his pockets and fetched a dollar, The flames they roared around and above his neck, But sadly, all they did was incinerated the cash and boy didn't he HOLLAR!

11-02-2009, 05:46 PM	#31
Herman Munster AW Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: In a house in NZ. Posts: 111	Just an OLD Poem Contest The boy stood on the burning deck, He dug deep into his pockets and fetched a dollar, The flames they roared around and above his neck, All they did was incinerated the cash and boy didn't he HOLLAR!

03-18-2009, 04:44 AM	#26
Feiss Sleeps during the day Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Shanghai Posts: 1,772	The boy stood on the burning deck and held out his blue ink bic shouted at the internet quick who the hell won this contest, ick!

11-02-2009, 05:48 PM	#32
Herman Munster AW Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: In a house in NZ. Posts: 111	Just an OLD Poem Contest I said to myself the boy was on the burning deck This place is so much hotter and bleak There are people here and there and here some more But all the cash I managed to raise could get him a 2bit whore

11-02-2009, 05:49 PM	#33
Herman Munster AW Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: In a house in NZ. Posts: 111	Just an OLD Poem Contest Again! The boy stood on the burning deck His life was clearly little more than a speck It is resurrected, is this a good or bad deed We will have to wait and watch the seed!

11-03-2009, 02:18 AM	#34
Blarg AW Addict Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 144	The boy stood on the burning deck, thinking honor comes and goes, but as he owned just that one neck, he'd best strap into women's clothes.

11-03-2009, 02:29 AM	#35
NeWWrItEr* Almost expert! Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Georgia Posts: 91	The boy stood on the burning deck While crying his eyes out Thinking of how the world is a wreck It cannot be saved, this he knows without a doubt __________________ *Writers are simply people PAID TO LIE* Help Them: Feed Me! Adopted from Valenth

11-03-2009, 07:15 AM	#36
Colin Fiat I Own A Metronome Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Perth Posts: 160	The boy stood on the burning deck Of starship enterprise A Klingon dagger in the neck Of Romulan disguised

11-04-2009, 01:03 AM	#38
Lavern08 A Legend in Her Own Mind Join Date: May 2009 Location: Marlboro Country Posts: 850	The boy stood on the burning deck Observing the mess he'd made The turkey was fried But so was his hide At least his insurance was paid. __________________ ******************************************** Plays:** * None But the Righteous * Invitation to a Wedding * Sisters ***************************** WIP:** Nobody's Baby Old Friends

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