Is this book-worthy? (True Crime)

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MarkEsq

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Hi all,

Just wanted to get some feedback on whether y'all thought this might be a worthwhile project. Below is the "Summary" that I'd put in the proposal. It's not polished or perfect, but should give you an idea of the book. Let me know what you think, good, bad, or indifferent.

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On November 15, 2001, a storm hits Austin, Texas, and hits hard. In the midst of the driving rain, 44-year-old Tony Russo pulls up in front of the expensive house owned by successful businesswoman Diane Holik, the house she is looking to sell. He knocks on the door and she lets him in, recognizing him from a previous visit in which he’d said the house was perfect for him and his wife. She hands him a towel to dry off while they talk. What she doesn’t know, can’t know, is that the pious-acting man in her home has an uncontrollable penchant for choking women, one that has already landed him in the penitentiary for twenty years.
She finds out soon enough, in the worst way imaginable.
When her body is found the next day, police canvas the area and find out that a man has appeared at the home of several women, all young and pretty, trying to sell their homes. One them, a former reporter, became suspicious and wrote down his license plate and the trail led to Russo, who worked as a worship leader and music director at a Church in Bastrop, Texas, a short drive from Austin.
Detectives were sure he was their man, especially when they discovered his previous conviction for kidnapping—he’d grabbed and choked several women—and his frequent visits to necrobabes.com, a website devoted to “erotic horror for adults,” including strangulation. His religious conversion, culminating in his prison marriage to the woman who had converted him, and his self-published book about his prison experiences couldn’t hide his true nature or quell his desires.
All the way through trial, Russo maintained his innocence, but by applying several types of forensic science and technology, from DNA to cell phone triangulation, prosecutors were able to disprove his story and convince a jury of his guilt.
This book is told with the help of numerous individuals, most notably the homicide detectives who caught Russo, and the prosecutors who tried the case. Russo’s defense lawyer has also agreed to cooperate, as far as client-confidentiality allows. Also interviewed for the book are several of the women Russo attacked and choked before he took the ultimate step. Additionally, the psychiatrist who testified for the state has agreed to give his opinions on Russo, and his conclusion is no surprise: Russo was on his way to becoming a serial murderer; a Killer, Interrupted.
 

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Having women choked to death is, personally, a little hard to swallow:)

Do you intend to tell the story like a literary non-fiction? You said, "This book is told with the help of numerous individuals..." If so, this could be interesting, as if viewed through the eyes (POV) of various characters involved, especially the others choked. Having those POVs accumulating to disprove the murder's story would be clever, but how would the reader be surprised? Is someone else a likely suspect?

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I think this can be very gripping if you keep the writing understated and layered. Especially if the trial was a nail-biter to the end.

I also like the idea of several competing POVs, Rashamon style.

Are you able to interview Russo?
 

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I think this can be very gripping if you keep the writing understated and layered. Especially if the trial was a nail-biter to the end.

I also like the idea of several competing POVs, Rashamon style.

Are you able to interview Russo?


I can certainly try, I don't if he's the chatty type. He maintains his innocence, so maybe he'll talk to me, try and persuade me, which could be interesting.
 

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I am wondering if there was enough to the investigation to make this crime worth writing about. The reading fun is in the investigation, IMO, and there doesn't seem to have been much here. I don't write true crime (though I'd love to), but I read all of it I can get my hands on, and very seldom do I come across one where the bulk of the story is not the investigation. Sometimes the author will go into the background of the killer (or at times, the victim, but the killer is where the interest lies), to flesh out the investigation.

Maybe I misunderstood, but I didn't deduce from the statement "This book is told with the help of numerous individuals" that the book would feature different viewpoints.

I'd be interested to know how this proposal works for you.
 

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might be... why don't you at least draft or outline it... could also be that you have a different sort of book, but won't know until you do a bit more than you showed us here.

The recent supreme court decision about not letting inmates pay for their own dna tests on police-held evidence might move it into an issue book category... or who knows, you may find your imagination takes off and you've got a novel.
 

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Excellent advice, annew! An issue book - great idea. Will give you a great premise to work from and organize your content with (lousy sentence, that one). You will find it much easier to create your structure with a solid premise to work from.
 
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