A DeVorn approaches! (attack/magic/item)

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DeVorn

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Hi.

I'm a 20-something college graduate who works in retail management and has an immense love for writing, history, fantasy, comedy, science fiction, and steampunk. My favorite authors include Jorge Luis Borges and Douglas Adams.

I came to these forums for feedback on a particular novel I'm working on; I've posted the first part here for feedback. If you've got something you want me to look at and give indepth feedback on, I'd be happy to. Although I myself am very thick-skinned, I can sometimes be a bit blunt about my opinions; I try not to be overbearing but sometimes it's an uphill battle.
 

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Welcome to AW. Hope you enjoy your stay with us.

How do you like your popcorn?
 

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Hello. ^^ Hope you enjoy your stay here, from one newb to another! And, I'd like to read it, but I have no idea how to. o.o -feels totally stupid as she's sure everyone else knows- ._.
 

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Hi, DeVorn. Welcome and enjoy your stay here.
 
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