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So, say you're [a part of] the most powerful single entity the Earth has ever and will ever know. And by "single entity" I mean a collective comprised of several million (about 5-ish) individuals that together make one whole.

What do you want?

If I may answer my own question:

I guess it's pretty obvious that taking over the world would be relatively easy. I figure, if they really focused on it, they could do it in about two or three days. But why bother? As it is, wealth is really not an issue, because it wouldn't do them any tangible good. Physical sustainance is also a non-issue. No point in taking control of the world and not gain anything other than the headache of maintaining that control. But it would seem to me that people might still be fearful of such a thing, so perhaps public relations would be a concern, perhaps? Maybe what they would want would be to be trusted.

That's just my opinion, for whatever value it holds, if any. What do you think?

(And, please, no Borg references. I'm weary of fending them off. :))
 

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Define power. Is it making fifty nuclear explosions with your mind? Control over space and time? Mind control? Can he fly? Each one has a different use.

Personally, I'd use my power for my own personal amusement. The world would be my playground. Taking over the world would be like herding cats. Millions of cats.
 

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Power ultimately means getting people to do what you want them to do. Many people with power do this in an arbitrary and senseless way, simply to get people used to obeying and being controlled.

For example: You are no longer allowed to say "good day." You must now say "Heil Hitler!"
You are no longer allowed to call people "Mister," "Miss," "buddy," or any other such thing. You must now call everyone "Comrade."
 

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I don't really understand what a being/entity/whatever that could destroy worlds in a day, would actually want? If they wanted something they could just take it.

I think having some kind of all powerful character like this would be detrimental to the story, some kind of weakness would be better.

As an example ( a poor one at that too ), the entity needs to enslave the entire planets population as it needs a specific hormone, that only that planets race produces, to feed on.

The less it has, the more it separates from the "collective" and its powers weaken etc or something.

Oh darn, I just rambled a bit, I fear.
 

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So, say you're [a part of] the most powerful single entity the Earth has ever and will ever know. And by "single entity" I mean a collective comprised of several million (about 5-ish) individuals that together make one whole.

What do you want?

Whatever would be most fun to play with in the course of the story. Whatever would make an interesting social commentary in today's world or human nature in general.

Something like this is a larger part of story than mere plot or character. It becomes the connecting esoteric layer of theme, of morals, of all that stuff that English teachers will harp on in later years.

If I had something like this in a story, that's what I'd be looking at for inspiration.

Good luck.
 

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So, say you're [a part of] the most powerful single entity the Earth has ever and will ever know. And by "single entity" I mean a collective comprised of several million (about 5-ish) individuals that together make one whole.

What do you want?

Doesn't the answer to that depend upon the answer to this: “Powerful in what way?”
 
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So, say you're [a part of] the most powerful single entity the Earth has ever and will ever know. And by "single entity" I mean a collective comprised of several million (about 5-ish) individuals that together make one whole.

What do you want?

If I may answer my own question:

I guess it's pretty obvious that taking over the world would be relatively easy. I figure, if they really focused on it, they could do it in about two or three days. But why bother? As it is, wealth is really not an issue, because it wouldn't do them any tangible good. Physical sustainance is also a non-issue. No point in taking control of the world and not gain anything other than the headache of maintaining that control. But it would seem to me that people might still be fearful of such a thing, so perhaps public relations would be a concern, perhaps? Maybe what they would want would be to be trusted.

That's just my opinion, for whatever value it holds, if any. What do you think?

(And, please, no Borg references. I'm weary of fending them off. :))

Here at Space Command we also discourage Borg references. Hohumm what a silly idea. Borgs.

On the other hand, entities that take over planets sound like fun. I recommend starting off your new all-powerful thing with an ad campaign. Emphasize how you are all new and improved since the last time you took over and a few bad things happened, maybe. But that's in the past, this time: fewer mass-gelatinizations, less arbitrary hastening of soul-crassening, not so many animated snot biscuits (okay, some people liked them, but just fewer overall)...you know, public-interest stories with a modern slant: kids find bucket, their souls are crassened but their bucket-finding was still a good idea.
That kind of thing.
 

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1) How is the collective held together? I'm assuming that it is non-human entities since if you get enough (roughly 2-3) humans together you start to get factions and the goals of the individual faction would differ.

2) How does the (human or not) collective think of the non collective human race? Rivals for resources? Lesser beings? Equals? A nice snack?
 

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What does the biggest fish in a small pool want?

A bigger pool.


Seriously. What did "God" want in star trek 5? He wanted the hell off his planet.

This group, having attained all the power on earth, would want to expand. Maybe to the solar system. Most likely to a nearby planet they've discovered to have life. Power wants more power. When you've got it all in one location, it's time to expand to another.
 

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Personally, I'd use my power for my own personal amusement. The world would be my playground. Taking over the world would be like herding cats. Millions of cats.

This actually doesn't turn out so well for the cats.
 

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Does the collective necessarily operate in the foreground? Are they perhaps some shadow group, controlling things from the background? Maybe they lurk in the shadows, and they play games against each other. Like a global version of Risk: each member has a territory, and they use it to screw with each other.

Or each member has a group of humans that are theirs. Breed the humans, make them worship one as a god, start wars, teach them to evolve, slaughter them like sheep.

It's just way less fun to be all powerful in the open. It's more fun when humans don't know they're being messed with.
 

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I typed a huge long response to many of the questions in this thread earlier, but the maintenance apparently started during the hour that I was typing.:rant:

I can't handle it tonight, but I'll try and reproduce it tomorrow.

Sorry. :(

Thanks to everyone who's replied so far. :)

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Does the collective necessarily operate in the foreground? Are they perhaps some shadow group, controlling things from the background? Maybe they lurk in the shadows, and they play games against each other. Like a global version of Risk: each member has a territory, and they use it to screw with each other.

Or each member has a group of humans that are theirs. Breed the humans, make them worship one as a god, start wars, teach them to evolve, slaughter them like sheep.

It's just way less fun to be all powerful in the open. It's more fun when humans don't know they're being messed with.


There's only one real "entity" in a true collective race like the vyca. But otherwise, good suggestions.
 

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Okay, let's try this response thing again. Hopefully, there won't be any maintenance today. ;)

I see that I was probably a bit more vague in my presentation than I intended. I'll try and answer some of the questions presented in an effort to clear up some of the fog. :)

First thing I want to say is that I haven't actually nailed down a number of individuals in this collective. I say 5 million for easy math, but I'm considering anything from 5 million to 15 million. Just haven't come to a final decision, yet.

Anyway . . . .

What is it this 5-mil strong entity lacks? What do they need in order to sustain their collective?

What do they lack? In terms of survival needs, not much. :) Like I said, money is a non-issue. The way I figure it, since we are talking about a collective all acting as a single unit (actually, they technically are a single unit, being that they're sharing one giant superbrain, so-to-speak), the financial resources of one are he financial resources of all. Are you with me? Even in an absurd example of each one only coming into a single dollar per year, that's still 5 million dollars a year! The realistic number would, of course, be considerably greater than that. So, money isn't a problem. :) That, in my opinion, means shelter is also not an issue. :) Food . . . well - and pardon me for this, but since I'm new to the site, I'm trying to play some of my more outside-the-box ideas close to my chest, lest everyone here think I'm completely insane - that's not nearly as difficult to come by as you'd think. There are plenty of willing volunteers. It's still something that has to be managed carefully, but there's really no chance of them going hungry without some sort of apocalyptic event.

So, the point of that was: They're not lacking anything in terms of survival needs. The only thing I can think of them lacking is the trust factor. The way I'm writing this, there is a considerable segment of the underworld (meaning: non-human circles) that believes there is some grand conspiracy being orchestrated by the collective and that they simply cannot be trusted. As author and all-knowing lord (of my writing I mean; please no one be offended :)), I can tell you that there is no conspiracy. But, try proving it. Naturally, there's nothing wrong with having some things going on that, falsely of course, lend some validity to the rumors. ;) Still, that's the only thing I can think of that they're lacking - being trusted by the society in which they must live.

What do they need in order to sustain the collective? That's easy. :) All they need is for at least one of them to remain among the living (and, yes, I did just side-step saying 'alive'). In a nutshell, even in what I would call an almost impossible scenario where the entire collective was killed off except one, that one is sufficient to begin the process of rebuilding the numbers . . . which wouldn't take nearly as long as you might think. ;) So long as one exists, they all will exist - forever; even if one of them is killed (or otherwise perishes, though I can't see very many accidental deaths), their contribution to the collective still remains with the collective.

I don't really understand what a being/entity/whatever that could destroy worlds in a day, would actually want? If they wanted something they could just take it.

I think having some kind of all powerful character like this would be detrimental to the story, some kind of weakness would be better.

As an example ( a poor one at that too ), the entity needs to enslave the entire planets population as it needs a specific hormone, that only that planets race produces, to feed on.

The less it has, the more it separates from the "collective" and its powers weaken etc or something.

Oh darn, I just rambled a bit, I fear.

They're not gods. :) They have vulnerabilities. :)

For example (and there are less complicated ones), you weren't far off in your scenario. :) To oversimplify, the larger the collective gets, the more powerful it is. Good, no? Good no. See, that power has to be fuled by something, and in this case, that something is feeding. Now, like I said, feeding is not normally a problem. However, if the collective were to get too large, there would come a point where their need to feed would become a serious burden. And there is a significant moral issue that is not lost on them, no matter what the naysayers may tell you. So, they do try to keep the size of the collective within a reasonable limit, so as not to upset the balance.

And, like, I said, there's more obvious vulnerabilities as well. :) So, don't fret. ;)

Doesn't the answer to that depend upon the answer to this: “Powerful in what way?”

Ugh. The definition of the word 'power,' in my writing, is so abstract, I dare say words don't exist to describe it. It's basically a combination of mystical power, physical power, presence, the old hierarchies, and other factors that defy description.

Sorry I can't give you a better definition than that.

1) How is the collective held together? I'm assuming that it is non-human entities since if you get enough (roughly 2-3) humans together you start to get factions and the goals of the individual faction would differ.

2) How does the (human or not) collective think of the non collective human race? Rivals for resources? Lesser beings? Equals? A nice snack?

Yes, they are not human. :)

This is an abstract concept, but all 5 (or whatever) million of them add up to 1 being. It's an oversimplification, but they're basically all sharing a single mind that's a combination of everyone who is or has ever been in the collective. Now, there is some individuality that's necessarily retained, but it's not much. So, what I'm saying here is: It's hard for a single being to form factions for and against itself. :)

What do they think of humans? Do you have a couple of months for me to explain all that? LOL. :D Seriously, a lot plays into it, and I can't go into all of it in this thread without going way off topic.

The Cliff's Notes version: 'Humans are necessary, but the fact that they have near complete rule over the world goes against all of the old hierarchies and the laws of nature. That said, there's not a whole lot that can be done about it now without starting a war that likely wouldn't accomplish anything other than destroying the world as we know it. So, while it doesn't have to be necessarily liked, human rule does have to be tolerated - and respected to a certain extent. (PS: Run with that snack remark . . . ;))

Does the collective necessarily operate in the foreground? Are they perhaps some shadow group, controlling things from the background? Maybe they lurk in the shadows, and they play games against each other. Like a global version of Risk: each member has a territory, and they use it to screw with each other.

Or each member has a group of humans that are theirs. Breed the humans, make them worship one as a god, start wars, teach them to evolve, slaughter them like sheep.

It's just way less fun to be all powerful in the open. It's more fun when humans don't know they're being messed with.

I'm not sure if I'm answering your question or not, but . . .

The setup for my writing is (in a surprise to no one) very similar to the setup of Buffy - most humans have no idea that the underworld exists (much less any sort of collective) and the ones that do are expected to keep their mouths firmly shut.

There's only one real "entity" in a true collective race like the vyca. But otherwise, good suggestions.

True. :) That's why there is no plural for the word 'vyca.' Technically, there's only one of them - broken into many millions of parts. :)

As I said before, thanks to everyone that's responded. :) I do appreciate it. :)
 

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One thing I've always wondered about massive collectives.

What if someone were to capture a few parts and torture, brainwash and otherwise break them. Did they break the whole collective?

That might be a massive weakness to collective entities. Possible story too. Try to get back the members your evil enemies are torturing.
 

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What does any organism want? Food, shelter, security, a means of reproduction. etc, and so on.

Conflict arises when those things are threatened. I'd go from there.

For something more specific, it sounds to me like it thinks the 'human situation' is out of control. It has the means to bring it under control, but only at a significant potential risk to itself, and then inherits all the problems that us humans are struggling with.
 

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One thing I've always wondered about massive collectives.

What if someone were to capture a few parts and torture, brainwash and otherwise break them. Did they break the whole collective?

That might be a massive weakness to collective entities. Possible story too. Try to get back the members your evil enemies are torturing.

Good luck trying that with a vyca. ;)

Thanks for the response. :)
 
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Here's Maslow's Hierarchy of Needs in one of its forms, to prompt some questions.
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How do these organisms mature? Reproduce? Die? How do they secure their own futures? How do they form societies? How do they deal with other organisms like themselves? Do they ally or fight? How do they esteem their own existence? Do they have consciences? Do they have ambitions or unmet desires? Why have they developed the powers that they have? What competitive advantages do they offer? What other competitive advantages do similar organisms have?

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These creatures don't work on human time-scales.

These are creatures that can plan strategically over time-frames that humans can't dream of. Their maturation links to the way that they mature and grow the individuals making up their cells. They breed their unspecialised members to become specialised, giving themselves special-purpose organs. They develop special communication facilities so they can spread their bodies over large distances. They cause their members to develop special technologies to assist the creature's survival and propagation (reproduction, communication, food-sources, scouts, defence against rival organisms), then they expand aggressively, limited only by whatever transport they can construct for themselves. They form redundant organs and have no compunction in sacrificing bits of themselves in exchange for greater opportunity. They manage their strategic resources (food, shelter, transport, communications) meticulously.

Their notion of species links to the way that they organise themselves and communicate. When they meet another of their own species they 'reproduce' by swapping the better of their organs. This means that they may absorb colonies of very different creatures over time.

Over time, the organs develop past their original function, and the creature begins to grow weak. When this happens, others of its kind attack and plunder the ageing creature for its better organs. The less functional organs are destroyed.

At some point, through the overwhelming complexity of its own internal communications, the organism can no longer support its own size, and splits off a set of redundant organs. This new organism tries to colonise some new frontier. It may also plunder neighbours for their new organs.

This creature competes with other species of similar scale and dimensions but different reproductive and sustaining strategies. I'll leave them as an exercise for the reader. :)
 

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So, say you're [a part of] the most powerful single entity the Earth has ever and will ever know. And by "single entity" I mean a collective comprised of several million (about 5-ish) individuals that together make one whole.

What do you want?

If I may answer my own question:

I guess it's pretty obvious that taking over the world would be relatively easy. I figure, if they really focused on it, they could do it in about two or three days. But why bother? As it is, wealth is really not an issue, because it wouldn't do them any tangible good. Physical sustainance is also a non-issue. No point in taking control of the world and not gain anything other than the headache of maintaining that control. But it would seem to me that people might still be fearful of such a thing, so perhaps public relations would be a concern, perhaps? Maybe what they would want would be to be trusted.

That's just my opinion, for whatever value it holds, if any. What do you think?

(And, please, no Borg references. I'm weary of fending them off. :))

Well, with those numbers, the usual stuff would bore the entity out quickly. Plus, something that powerful SHOULD be evolved past good and evil concepts.

Maybe the entity would travel around the universe (it is pretty big) and try get a greater understanding of the nature of the universe.

What do you get for the entity that has everything?
Answers to the big questions. And someone out there has to know, right?

I'm still on "hot dogs in packs of 8, hot dog BUNS in packs of 10".
What's THAT all about?
 

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So, say you're [a part of] the most powerful single entity the Earth has ever and will ever know. And by "single entity" I mean a collective comprised of several million (about 5-ish) individuals that together make one whole.

What do you want?

If I may answer my own question:

I guess it's pretty obvious that taking over the world would be relatively easy. I figure, if they really focused on it, they could do it in about two or three days. But why bother? As it is, wealth is really not an issue, because it wouldn't do them any tangible good. Physical sustainance is also a non-issue. No point in taking control of the world and not gain anything other than the headache of maintaining that control. But it would seem to me that people might still be fearful of such a thing, so perhaps public relations would be a concern, perhaps? Maybe what they would want would be to be trusted.

That's just my opinion, for whatever value it holds, if any. What do you think?

(And, please, no Borg references. I'm weary of fending them off. :))

To get rid of my "partners" (except for the hot one) and have it all to myself.
 
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