Haikuicide

JAlpha · Aug 2, 2005

Here's one I just had published in Tiny Words http://tinywords.com/index.php/about/. . .

fresh iguana stew
with the last warm tortilla
mopping the tureen

trumancoyote · Aug 2, 2005

What a filling poem, and w/ so few words

poetinahat · Aug 2, 2005

trumancoyote said:
What a filling poem, and w/ so few words

Agree wholeheartedly!
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Yellowed fingertips
hold my breakfast cigarette
in dull TV glow

JAlpha · Aug 3, 2005

View from my balcony
she prefers Fruit of the Loom
he fancies peach thongs

poetinahat · Aug 3, 2005

Neighbours' underwear
Immortalised in haiku:
What strange genius!

PattiTheWicked · Aug 3, 2005

Hanging up siding
on the patio today
It's just freakin' hot

JAlpha · Aug 3, 2005

poetinahat said:
Neighbours' underwear
Immortalised in haiku:
What strange genius!

Is that the same thing as being a brilliant idiot? :roll:

rhymegirl · Aug 3, 2005

On your balcony
you view half-naked people,
what a peeping tom.

Perks · Aug 3, 2005

much talk of skivvies
makes me wonder what moon phase
brings on panty craze

JAlpha · Aug 3, 2005

rhymegirl said:
On your balcony
you view half-naked people,
what a peeping tom.

Bored to death at Mom's
beachside condo balcony
she made me do it!

poetinahat · Aug 3, 2005

when you say 'peach thongs'
i hope to highest heaven
you're talking sandals

Perks · Aug 3, 2005

What have you people done to me? I don't write poetry... especially haikus.

tired out from thinking
in the standard prose confines
limited verse soothes

poetinahat · Aug 3, 2005

Perks said:
much talk of skivvies
makes me wonder what moon phase
brings on panty craze

O, startled reader,
blanch not at this ribaldry;
rather, come join us!

JAlpha · Aug 3, 2005

poetinahat said:
when you say 'peach thongs'
i hope to highest heaven
you're talking sandals

No sandals in sight
his peach thong was sporting
a cheeky sunburn

Perks · Aug 3, 2005

poetinahat said:
O, startled reader,
blanch not at this ribaldry;
rather, come join us!

seems I have no choice
my mind wanders where it will
I've no wish to stop

poetinahat · Aug 3, 2005

JAlpha said:
No sandals in sight
his peach thong was sporting
a cheeky sunburn

A word of warning:
don't read JAlpha's haiku
while drinking: "Mop, please!"

scfirenice · Aug 3, 2005

Yikes...good visual.

my second haiku

I should be asleep
The alarm will soon go off
Twelve step program Please.

S

PattiTheWicked · Aug 3, 2005

JAlpha said:
Bored to death at Mom's
beachside condo balcony
she made me do it!

Briefs ride up too high
Thongs floss the center crevice
Why bother wearing?

JAlpha · Aug 3, 2005

scfirenice said:
Yikes...good visual.

my second haiku

I should be asleep
The alarm will soon go off
Twelve step program Please.

S

No, no no

It's a 5-7-5 step program, that you need

poetinahat · Aug 3, 2005

PattiTheWicked said:
Briefs ride up too high
Thongs floss the center crevice
Why bother wearing?

it's a paradox
look or feel good - seldom both
answer: commando

PattiTheWicked · Aug 3, 2005

poetinahat said:
it's a paradox
look or feel good - seldom both
answer: commando

Easier for girls.
What's between us and denim?
No one ever knows.

poetinahat · Aug 4, 2005

PattiTheWicked said:
Easier for girls.
What's between us and denim?
No one ever knows.

Knowledge satisfies
But mystery fascinates:
Light needs its shadow.

Alphabet · Aug 4, 2005

It vibrant, I dull
I am my shadow's shadow
Being dragged around.

JAlpha · Aug 4, 2005

Alphabet said:
It vibrant, I dull
I am my shadow's shadow
Being dragged around.

That is soooooo deep, it makes my head hurt. Love it :Hail:

JAlpha · Aug 4, 2005

Getting two for the price of one this morning--I posted this one for the "aquatic" prompt in the poetry game too . . .

reddish-green larvae
mosquito sized lobsters
flaunting their sharp claws

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